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Kyleniebob — Tears
Published: 2004-06-11 22:57:14 +0000 UTC; Views: 83; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 14
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They fall down my cheeks,No pattern do they follow.
But each one seems to seek
A place in my heart where it is hollow.
They make my eyes look weary.
They crowd my face, making it wet.
The salt stings the wounds
That layer my pale face.
It hurts, but not as much
As my heart does
As I cry.
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Comments: 3
Very sweet, very nice.
It looks like you started out trying to rhyme, but then gave up. If rhyming doesn't work, don't worry about it. When most poets try to rhyme it usually ruins the poem, so feel free to not do it if the poem isn't coming out right.
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excellent display of emotion. You are obviously a talented writer
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