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Kyleniebob β€” Two Young Lovers
Published: 2005-05-21 05:29:47 +0000 UTC; Views: 215; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 2
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Description She twirls her skirts
Dancing like the wind on grass.
He watches her with a smile
His eyes dance like flames.
Her red curly hair bounces
Like children at play.
His black hair is ruffled
As if the breeze was teasing him.
She collapses on the grass
Giggling at the signs of spring.
He smiles as he watches
Watches her eyes laugh.
She plucks a yellow flower
Wishing for these days never to end.
He finally stands and comes to her
Almost crying with love.
She watches him carefully
Not saying a word to disturb him.
He sits beside her, taking her hands
Deeply his eyes search hers.
She sits, not saying a word, not blinking.
She waits for him to speak.
He strokes her cheeks intimately
As he searches her soul.
She shudders at his touch
She knows him not but loves him much.
He takes his hand away from her cheek.
Then the man cries .
She doesn’t understand why he cries
But she cries with him without question.
He kisses her soft, full lips
And he leaves.
She watches, not fully understanding.
She almost stands up to get him.
He continues to walk,
Hoping she will stop him.
She holds herself back
So she does not run and yell after him.
He continues to walk
Until he disappears and never returns.
She weeps with regret,
Never again will she let love pass her by.
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Comments: 66

Aphrodite2112 [2005-05-22 09:00:05 +0000 UTC]

Wow that was so good. It was sad but good and I just had to say something cause that was very good and very true. That does happen a lot, people let others go when its not needed. I feel that was some times, like my present relationship is a little one sided, but i can see the potential in it and how i know i love him. With other past relationships i always gave up when things got difficult but i learned my lesson and am going to work like hell to keep this one, even though he is leaving for the marines in two months... *cries*
NE ways great poem

Mariel

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Kyleniebob In reply to Aphrodite2112 [2005-05-22 20:38:32 +0000 UTC]

Thank-you!
Stick in there. I hope things turn out alright for you and him.
I know how it is to have someone close to you in the service. My brother is actually over in Iraq fighting right now.

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Aphrodite2112 In reply to Kyleniebob [2005-05-23 05:27:41 +0000 UTC]

Wow... i'm sorry but every one who goes out there is strong and makes a good impact for us. I'm just going to miss him a lot. I really do like your poem. Good luck urself

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Kyleniebob In reply to Aphrodite2112 [2005-05-23 22:36:37 +0000 UTC]

thank!
Um....would you like me to make you an avatar? I would if you want one.

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Aphrodite2112 In reply to Kyleniebob [2005-05-23 23:24:25 +0000 UTC]

Avatar? what's that?

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Kyleniebob In reply to Aphrodite2112 [2005-05-24 00:03:37 +0000 UTC]

like an icon thingy.....for deviant art...like I have a variety of random pictures (I had to get poor quality pictures...poo on yahoo. lol.)

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Aphrodite2112 In reply to Kyleniebob [2005-05-24 00:11:45 +0000 UTC]

Sure! sounds awesome... I don't know how to get those icons and stuff. What kind of Pictures do you have? Do you have any love ones? Since i'm in such a " I'm in love" mood... *smiles*

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Aphrodite2112 In reply to Kyleniebob [2005-05-24 00:11:19 +0000 UTC]

Sure! sounds awesome... I don't know how to get those icons and stuff. What kind of Pictures do you have? Do you have any love ones? Since i'm in such a " I'm in love" mood... *smiles*

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Kyleniebob In reply to Aphrodite2112 [2005-05-24 00:27:18 +0000 UTC]

Well you find a picture you like (and a phrase if you want or just different pictures) and I'll make you one. ^_^

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Aphrodite2112 In reply to Kyleniebob [2005-05-24 00:32:11 +0000 UTC]

How do i get it to you?

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Kyleniebob In reply to Aphrodite2112 [2005-05-24 00:50:35 +0000 UTC]

just note me the link or if it's a picture email it to me at pesci_freddi@yahoo.com

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Aphrodite2112 In reply to Kyleniebob [2005-05-24 00:56:53 +0000 UTC]

Ok... is it ok to use pictures... i don't know i'll send them and you can see what you can do? I'll just send some that i like and what ever you can fit then you can fit i guess. *smiles* thnx a lot

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Kyleniebob In reply to Aphrodite2112 [2005-05-24 01:22:49 +0000 UTC]

No problem. ^_^

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Aphrodite2112 In reply to Kyleniebob [2005-05-24 02:25:28 +0000 UTC]

I was having minor difficulties... could you email me your email again?

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Kyleniebob In reply to Aphrodite2112 [2005-05-24 19:33:00 +0000 UTC]

pesci_freddi@yahoo.com

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Aphrodite2112 In reply to Kyleniebob [2005-06-17 00:01:35 +0000 UTC]

What was that for?

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Kyleniebob In reply to Aphrodite2112 [2005-06-18 03:39:22 +0000 UTC]

"I was having minor difficulties... could you email me your email again? "
That's what you said before that.

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Aphrodite2112 In reply to Kyleniebob [2005-06-18 06:31:51 +0000 UTC]

OH! Ok... sorry, yeah that was to send you the pictures... Me sorries, i've been really confused lately. My boyfriend, the one I'm SO in love with dumped me monday and I'm just really... like, there's noe words to express the pain I'm feeling on the inside. It's like all the pain i could feel pyhiscally has been placed into the spot where my heart once was... I cant feel the pain on the outside, only on the inside

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Kyleniebob In reply to Aphrodite2112 [2005-06-19 01:57:10 +0000 UTC]

Awww! I don't really know what you're going through...however I do think that you'll (respectively) get over it. That sounds so rude. I wish I could put it lighter, I really do....your heart will heal in time. ^_^ If you need anyone to talk to...(sometimes talking to a complete stranger does help) you can talk to me.

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Aphrodite2112 In reply to Kyleniebob [2005-06-23 00:46:38 +0000 UTC]

LMAO.... it does help to talk to some one who doest really know me or Jeff... I mean its so haqrd to talk to your friends when they sit there and judge him when they think they know him when they dont. I get so sad though when they would tell me how heb was suvch a distrespectable person towards womsan... when spending time with him ALL THE TIME and always being with him knowing more and more about him... you just cant help to love him and want to be around him more. tHERE IS SO MUCH MORE TO HIM THEN WHAT THEY THINK THEY KNOW. He is a good person... and i read a couple of things that helped me realiz that it was my fault... and if i would have paid attention then he wouldnt have agreed that the breaking up thing wasn't a bad idea. Lol i pretty much prevoct it. I just cant help but miss and want him... life feels so different... i doint feel the thrive and enegy to do what i did and keep moving forward... nothing makes sense anymore... nothing makes me laugh or smile anymore... i feel nothing physically only emotionall... and i feel like i'll wait a while and then if he doesnt call me i will write a new letter and take to his house and put it in his mail box and let god dedcide from there on what should hyappen *bites nails*

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Kyleniebob In reply to Aphrodite2112 [2005-06-23 01:45:44 +0000 UTC]

Do you feel better?
I've never had a boyfriend...so I'm not much of a help but...What was it that made you two break up?

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Aphrodite2112 In reply to Kyleniebob [2005-06-29 05:40:46 +0000 UTC]

Why have you never had a boyfriend? *thinks to self " I'm probably going to regret asking that" winks* We broke up because of my friends, because we didn't talk anymore, and because he's leaving for the marines. But I feel a little better cause I know tomorrow I am going to call him and we are going to be friends, cause I have found another guy, who can't replace him but is freaking hot and sweet and cute but also leaving for the marines... i think me and him are dating... but, then again i could be wrong.

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Kyleniebob In reply to Aphrodite2112 [2005-06-29 06:18:51 +0000 UTC]

o.O you just love the marines

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Aphrodite2112 In reply to Kyleniebob [2005-07-01 05:46:05 +0000 UTC]

I guess so huh? I don't know honestly right now I hate the Marines... they have stolen the one person I need more then anything... thuoghnthey hasd him first but still

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Kyleniebob In reply to Aphrodite2112 [2005-07-02 02:32:05 +0000 UTC]

lol.
It'll be good. I'm rooting for ya!

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Aphrodite2112 In reply to Kyleniebob [2005-07-03 05:29:21 +0000 UTC]

Lol... I think it's funny. I swear guys for me are nothing but trouble. I think it's funny cause in part of a song it goes " Ever been stuck on a boy like crazy glue," and it goes on and on about don't worry about a thing. Lmao...

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Kyleniebob In reply to Aphrodite2112 [2005-07-03 15:30:43 +0000 UTC]

lol!

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Aphrodite2112 In reply to Kyleniebob [2005-07-15 06:08:35 +0000 UTC]

That's ok there's this other guys now. Steve and we use to go out and we are going out again! yay! yay! *sings and dances* we went out in the 8th grade and together again we are... ya!

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Kyleniebob In reply to Aphrodite2112 [2005-07-18 02:13:34 +0000 UTC]

How old are you again?

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Aphrodite2112 In reply to Kyleniebob [2005-07-18 16:52:37 +0000 UTC]

Me I am turning 17 in december which right now makes me.... 16! Lmao... why?

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Kyleniebob In reply to Aphrodite2112 [2005-07-18 19:58:25 +0000 UTC]

Just wondering.
I'm turning 17 in October...I haven't had a boyfriend yet and I'm not really in too much of a hurry to get one...unless of course he isn't a self righteous pig like most of them seem to be...well only at my school.

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Aphrodite2112 In reply to Kyleniebob [2005-07-22 03:30:19 +0000 UTC]

Lmao! I know what u mean... hee hee giggle giggle... Guys can be but u'll find one who isn't lmao! I had one in away but u prolly better off... I wish some times I never was so boycrazy lmao!

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Kyleniebob In reply to Aphrodite2112 [2005-07-23 01:28:32 +0000 UTC]

lol

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Aphrodite2112 In reply to Kyleniebob [2005-08-08 12:57:10 +0000 UTC]

*big smile* So how are things going?

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Kyleniebob In reply to Aphrodite2112 [2005-08-09 03:16:47 +0000 UTC]

Great!
Actually I think one of my guy friends is going to ask me to go to Beauty and the Beast with him! I hope so. I would love to see that on stage...What do you think?
Hey, Disney's Beauty and the Beast is at the rennasance(sp?) in Mansfield last weekend and this weekend!!! I saw them do Wizard of Oz there and it really was pretty good. Are you interested in going?
May you find your beast
~Ryan

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Aphrodite2112 In reply to Kyleniebob [2005-08-09 03:20:44 +0000 UTC]

Aww... it sounds like he is asking you too go. You should be all "yeah" I am glad your doin great! That's always a plus. So is this some one u like in more of a friendship kind of way, cause who knows he could be hopeing for a date from ya *winks*

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Kyleniebob In reply to Aphrodite2112 [2005-08-09 03:22:55 +0000 UTC]


Um...
I kind of like him...lol.

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Aphrodite2112 In reply to Kyleniebob [2005-08-09 03:41:16 +0000 UTC]

Really now... hmm, tell me about him then. What do you like about him, what don't you like about him, where did you meet him, how long have you known, why do you like him?

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Kyleniebob In reply to Aphrodite2112 [2005-08-09 03:56:10 +0000 UTC]

lol! I'll note you.

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Aphrodite2112 In reply to Kyleniebob [2005-08-09 03:59:40 +0000 UTC]

OK THAT WORKS!

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Kyleniebob In reply to Aphrodite2112 [2005-08-09 04:11:19 +0000 UTC]

lol

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Aphrodite2112 In reply to Kyleniebob [2005-10-10 02:54:56 +0000 UTC]

JEFF IS BACK FROM THE MARINES AND I AM SO HAPPY SO SO SO HAPPY I DON'T KNOW HOW ELSE TO SHOW IT IT IS SO CRAZY! AND WE HANG OUT AND YEAH HE KISSED ME AND WE HELD HANDS AND ALL KINDS OF STUFF LOL!

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Kyleniebob In reply to Aphrodite2112 [2005-10-10 03:19:29 +0000 UTC]

Awww! That's great for you!
My brother comes home the first week in December.

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Aphrodite2112 In reply to Kyleniebob [2005-10-14 02:29:56 +0000 UTC]

Lol my birthday is december third... I am very happy and thank you very much for bein happy for me! *hugs you back* I just don't know how to tell him to stop dicking around and just ask me back out...

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Kyleniebob In reply to Aphrodite2112 [2005-10-15 03:50:40 +0000 UTC]

Ask him out.

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Aphrodite2112 In reply to Kyleniebob [2005-11-27 06:31:43 +0000 UTC]

Ask Jeff out? Na I haven't updated u have I? Well... we've been acting like a couple we he got back we hung out he held my hand... he kissed me next time he kissed me then for the first time ever let me fall asleep on him he preffers me awake he says "your more fun when your awake," so i found that sweet, though i fell asleep for five secs lol... well basically I finally asked if it was his way of sayin he wants to get back together I mean when we sat there by the ire and every time he got up to make the fire bigger he'd sit down and we'd get closer until both his arms were around me and my head was on his chest and his head was on my head... he was fallen asleep lmao... so was I... it was so amazing we were like that fo two hours from ten til twelve at night lmao I got grounded that day... but no he doesn't want a relationship right now lmao... I screwed up I wish I NEVER said anything lol... but do I have the right to want to be more? Or am I just bein Selfish? How have u been?
Mariel

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Kyleniebob In reply to Aphrodite2112 [2005-11-29 04:03:41 +0000 UTC]

You have every right to want to be more than friends. It sounds like it was romantic!
I've been great. My brother's coming home from Iraq soon...I can't wait...I miss him.
I have a guy friend who goes to a university in Kentucky who I really like and I would like more than friendship from him. He's coming back home to Ohio for Christmas in a few weeks so I hope he visits me a lot.
I guess even if we can't be more than friends I would rather be his friend than not have him in my life.
I hope the best for you Mariel! You're fun and interesting to talk to. <3 So keep replying. xD

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Aphrodite2112 In reply to Kyleniebob [2005-11-30 00:13:21 +0000 UTC]

Lmao i feel so loved! Your are so sweet yeah it does suck though when they only want to be friends but you would rather have there friendship then nothing at all. I am just having a hard time excepting the fact that well I don't want to except a "part time" friendship which is what I am getting from yeah. Lol I am hanging with my friend "JefF" hjat the library lol... *winks* at ya. YOUR so totally cool and fun tot alk to to and we can so relate!
Mariel

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Kyleniebob In reply to Aphrodite2112 [2005-11-30 00:45:13 +0000 UTC]

We can! ^_^
My delimma is that I'm afraid to tell him I like him more than a friend because I don't want to lose him as a friend...>. Maybe you wont be friends too much longer.

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Aphrodite2112 In reply to Kyleniebob [2005-12-01 23:26:46 +0000 UTC]

HEH HEH well he's got a girl sopsedly though he won't tell me her last name. I was all "Hmm, I know a Brittany, what's her last name?" and he went onto a different subject. And when I asked again later he went onto a differen't subject again. I had sent him and email saying "I want to forget I ever said anyof this to you, so lets go back to when we were just friends, and that wa the way it was." and he was pretty good at that but I saw him looken at me a couple times lol!
Just tell him that you have feelings more then friend feelings, but your afraid to tell him cause u don't want scare him away and lose such a teriic friend.
good luck!
Mariel

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