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Kylua95 — The Last Guardians_Ch.1_16_Eng
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Published: 2010-07-26 16:21:22 +0000 UTC; Views: 2058; Favourites: 16; Downloads: 14
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EDIT: this comic sadly stops here[link] (Previous Page)
FINALLY THE 16th PAGEEEEE!!! Translating this was HARDDDD.
Too many text effects *pant pant*
Sorry guys
Anyways here it is. I hope you can understand what dialogue comes first and what comes second... this panels are messed up
With the last panel it starts a little flashback. Can you understand who that grey pup is?
Thanks again to for the help with translating!
Art, Characters and Story (c) Arphenya VT Kylua95
Don't use without permission, don't re-color it, don't use my characters as yours
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Comments: 22
A lot emoticons, but awesome comic! I love your text effects, it's so coolest!
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I want to see the next page very soon.
Would you tell me when will be next page???
pleasee
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O_o Can't wait to see the next page!!!!!
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I've read whole story and it's awesome : D
When will be next page..? (I don't wnat to rush you or smth, just I see tht this one was sumbitted a year ago and... ._.)
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Your comic is really amazing and interesting, will it go on?
You haven't posted any comic pages for so long
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Thank you so much, I'm happy you like it! ^^
Yeah, it surely will go on, but sadly I couldn't work on it since many weeks
Page 17 is coming, by the way, I just have to correct a few things and to translate it
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u said u translated it x-x i dont get it
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I wrote this in Italian, then I translated it in English
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It's very unblanaced and out of control. I don't know where to start reading and where to stop. Look up some information on comic layouts and do some planning before just throwing it all onto a blank canvas.
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Yes, you're right, this page is a mess, I'm sorry you can't read it... I'm still studying how create a good balance in comic pages, but I have to continue the story anyway.
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