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A bitter taste, sometimes unexpected, would cross his lips. The first time, he looked around, wondering what utter fool would try to cast such a spell against him, or would try to prank him. Tricks and jokes belonged between equals, or rivals, and he had none, at least not close enough to try something.“Had is accurate, for the moment,” he thought, and didn’t permit himself to View her.
But the first time it happened, he Bogged all of the chickens, most of the goblins, some dwarves, and all of the fairies that he saw, or knew were in the vicinity. It was a knee-jerk reaction, and didn’t surprise those caught up in it. Living in or near the Castle Beyond the Goblin City carried a certain cachet, but also a risk; those residents expected it to happen to them.
Once he gained solitude, he went immediately to his study, and thoroughly examined the wards and defenses of his realm, finding no threats. He checked the weather, and confirmed that it was merely seasonal. He even checked the kitchen stores; the dwarven cook (a chef extraordinaire, and so never Bogged) was not missing any supplies.
He retired to his library, and began to research. Finding more information was… no, not a “piece of cake”… simple, once he came across an entry in Those Interwoven Connections, expressing the concept of various types of bonds between all manner of beings and things. This search did eventually lead him back to the tomes that describe the history, nature, and lore of the Labyrinth.
He knew that he shouldn’t have sung to her in that situation. Without a measure of reciprocal action, this link could easily prove to be an annoyance without benefit. Disgusted with himself, and with the consequences of her decisions as well as his own, he reminded himself to place the books and scrolls back in place manually, and with care, and then returned to his private suite.
Trying to settle for the evening, he allowed his thoughts to wander to his subjects, sadly neglected for three days. Nothing had gone wrong; in fact, things had run more smoothly under his inattention than his focus. Saving that idea for later consideration, he allowed the stench to begin to dissipate from the most thoroughly drenched of those recent swimmers, and retired to sleep.
Sleep didn’t come. In its absence – no, the cause of its absence – was more of that bitterness. This time it slipped just enough into his mouth that he actually tasted it. He groaned, and turned on his side. Before laying a spell on himself to allow for slumber, he sent a “reminder” to his personal staff to allow him extra rest in the morning, and then he welcomed temporary oblivion.
His dreams were mildly influenced by the events that he found disruptive, but not enough for him to give up on sleep. Just enough to sway his resolve. In the days to come, he would have to do more research into this blastedly annoying phenomenon, and see what could be done. Surely this bond could be modified; he knew not to try to remove it entirely. Severance of such a tie was not possible.
~~
The next morning, having made himself grouse at his elven attendants, he focused on his subjects and their genuine needs. He resolved disputes, oversaw the ground-breaking for a new common-use building, and even visited the town to admire the ever-present repairs. He received official messengers, and composed correspondence. And he consulted experts of different backgrounds.
The consensus was no surprise: do not attempt to alter or remove this link. Such an undertaking would cause irreparable damage to you both. He nodded or spoke his thanks to each of them, and continued his musing.
“Given that I actually feel this emotion of hers, I certainly have the right to know what triggers it.”
His decision made, the next time it occurred, he Viewed her. She wasn’t in any imminent danger, but was sitting quietly, alone in a well-appointed room of her family’s house. She sat, staring out the window as though watching for somebody who was already late, and who she knew wasn’t coming.
Another time, she was watching some form of entertainment with some of her girl-friends, and they were laughing while he wiped the bitterness away from his mouth.
Other events or moments triggered this: while she helped her brother learn and grow; when she bumped into a corner extra hard; when she realized that that teenaged boy she liked actually liked an almost-enemy of hers.
~~
As she grew, and the reasons for this emotion changed, he realized that he could discern from the exact flavor more precisely what she felt. Sometimes, too, he knew what prompted it. And he kept watching her.
There was one shade of emotion that began to come more frequently. Its increase was gradual, taking years to realize, and it surprised him. He would almost have described it as increasing in determination, had he permitted himself to be fanciful in these matters. He knew by now that another confrontation was inevitable, and he was equally uncertain of the outcome.
So he decided to set his own stage.
~~
She woke from a sound sleep, certain that she had heard someone calling her name. No, certain that he had called her name. Wait, he was still calling her name.
And she could feel an extra warmth in her ear, as though it had received a whisper.
She tried to shrug it off, attribute it to an unusual dream, stress, something she ate the night before, but she knew the truth. As much of the truth as she had context for in her life, at least.
From that point, she began to notice hints of his presence in her day-to-day routine: a whiff of that unique spice in the air around her, a bit of extra gravity-defiance in inanimate objects, the shapes in the clouds.
And she could feel a gentle caress, as though a leather-gloved hand were holding hers in comfort.
She finally realized that these encounters corresponded to those times when she felt something missing in her life, whether or not she succeeded in swallowing it down, channeling it into other pursuits, or allowing herself to wallow.
~~
One afternoon when she had nothing but time, she returned to the park. The obelisk remained surprisingly free of any signs of graffiti or other misuse, and there she waited. She expected something to happen. Anything… even a stray butterfly or a cloud to cross the sun.
Nothing.
He felt her sigh, and smirked, and knew from the taste crossing his lips that their time would be soon.
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Comments: 37
Labyrinth-Queen [2013-05-12 01:27:49 +0000 UTC]
I thouroughly enjoyed this! It is very interesting how he could taste her bitterness.
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DaEvilKitty [2013-05-04 04:50:29 +0000 UTC]
A very intriguing idea. I love it. ^^
Though now I wonder what other emotions would taste like... >>
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Kyndsie In reply to DaEvilKitty [2013-05-04 08:19:46 +0000 UTC]
You'd have to ask Jareth to describe the different flavors, and what he thinks they mean.
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selena-lenoir [2013-05-03 19:39:49 +0000 UTC]
I WANT MORE. Seriously. This is awesome, and I greatly approve. Yes, I know I still have a bajillion updates to write myself, but...I love your work. x3
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Kyndsie In reply to selena-lenoir [2013-05-03 21:56:25 +0000 UTC]
Oh, my friend, my friend. How to put this delicately...
Not on your tintype! (I've re-watched "The Music Man" recently.) thank you, and right back at you!
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selena-lenoir In reply to Kyndsie [2013-05-04 21:37:36 +0000 UTC]
Aww...BUT IT'S INTERESTING AND I LOVE IT! Dx *flails*
Hehe. But I do understand.
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Kyndsie In reply to selena-lenoir [2013-05-04 23:04:58 +0000 UTC]
It's always good to have understanding from another Labyfan!
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fargreencountry [2013-05-03 12:13:51 +0000 UTC]
I second the comments on this being original. Taste and emotions is not a common (though it is intriguing) connection.
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Ravenshymn [2013-05-03 02:10:55 +0000 UTC]
The many bonds and connections we have and make, not all of them liked or even disliked, like this one.
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startraveller776 [2013-05-03 01:34:39 +0000 UTC]
I'm honored that my sad story inspired this. I really like the idea of Jareth tasting her various forms of bitterness because of a special bond. Very unique idea, and I'm rather jealous of it, lol!
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Kyndsie In reply to startraveller776 [2013-05-03 03:10:09 +0000 UTC]
Feel free to use the idea; it can't possibly be an original idea of mine! (Besides, if I'm going to - someday - do my own take on the two of them as an adversarial instead of sympathetic pairing, I'll be using an idea of yours, so I'd say that makes us about even.)
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startraveller776 In reply to Kyndsie [2013-05-03 03:24:04 +0000 UTC]
I've never come across a fic where Jareth tastes her emotions (and I've read hundreds, it seems). I've come across loads of Jareth-bonded-to-Sarah fics (and the song he sang in the ballroom being the cause--or the peach), but never one where he tastes what she feels. That is uniquely you, and I think it ought to stay that way.
Besides, an adversarial reunion between Jareth & Sarah is most decidedly not an original idea in the fandom. It's just a severely underused premise.
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Kyndsie In reply to startraveller776 [2013-05-03 21:55:19 +0000 UTC]
Haven't we all read hundreds of Labyfics? Isn't that a requirement of some kind?
This started with the idea of him tasting it whenever she'd cry, and grew from there. The very first title was "Tears," but that would have given it away AND made people think that this was a more brooding / angsty fic than it is. Then it was "Salt". I ended up agreeing with ~spike30 's suggestion, and named it "Bittersweet" instead, because really, it's more accurate.
I'm actually tempted to write one where Sarah's is completely apathetic, uninterested, unimpressed, and implacably so. I'm not sure how it would end, so I'm reluctant to start it. But I guess you're right about them as adversaries isn't new.
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startraveller776 In reply to Kyndsie [2013-05-04 05:35:04 +0000 UTC]
I'm actually tempted to write one where Sarah's is completely apathetic, uninterested, unimpressed, and implacably so.
Hm. I have read that kind of story, but honestly since I'm all about them getting together (happily or unhappily, depending on my mood), I get a little twitchy-eyed when it turns out that Sarah's never going to soften towards the GK. But that's just me, lol.
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Kyndsie In reply to startraveller776 [2013-05-04 08:14:55 +0000 UTC]
but honestly since I'm all about them getting together (happily or unhappily, depending on my mood), I get a little twitchy-eyed when it turns out that Sarah's never going to soften towards the GK.
That's the funny thing: me, too. Just that sometimes whatever's going on in my own life, with my own emotions, etc, makes me want to vent in that way. Punish the GK just for being male. Punish Sarah for catching Jareth's eye in the first place.
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startraveller776 In reply to Kyndsie [2013-05-04 15:07:21 +0000 UTC]
I punish them by writing stories like "Just a Dream" or "The Road Not Taken" where they either start off loving one another but it goes horribly wrong, or they realize they could have had a life together but it's too late.
In both instances there is a real "could have been" and that's okay with me (I'm totally down with an unhappily ever after tale when it's well-written and I'm in a disconsolate mood). However, when it's "there's no chance in hell this would ever have happened," I have a hard time reading it.
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Kyndsie In reply to startraveller776 [2013-05-04 15:27:21 +0000 UTC]
Ah! Clever & tricksy we are!
I haven't actually let myself start writing anything of the kind, as channeling those necessary emotions AND staying focused is too draining for me lately (complete sentences? whole idea? who wants to handle those when all you want to do is throw things or wield a heavy baseball bat?!)
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startraveller776 In reply to Kyndsie [2013-05-04 15:41:29 +0000 UTC]
Wielding baseball bats?
Sounds like real life is giving you a hard time. That totally sucks. (Been there, done that, rinse and repeat. In fact, yesterday, I was all about swinging bats.)
If there is anything I can do...?
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Kyndsie In reply to startraveller776 [2013-05-04 16:12:09 +0000 UTC]
Thanks, but, nope. Not unless you've got a time machine I can borrow, and so choose not to risk. Again. *sigh*
I think that's one of the reasons that I enjoy J/S. Most of the time, he's actually having to risk as much as, if not more than Sarah. And I figure that it's about stinkin' time!
Anyway, hope that you enjoyed IM3! I plan to see it at some point, and already know to stay all the way to the end of the credits. (PLUS!!! My copy of "Captain America" finally arrived too... in the same package as "Labyrinth", so for me, it was nearly everything a fangirl could want.)
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startraveller776 In reply to Kyndsie [2013-05-04 22:07:36 +0000 UTC]
Thanks, but, nope. Not unless you've got a time machine I can borrow, and so choose not to risk. Again. *sigh* Been there, done that more times than I can count. I'm sorry.
Would another chapter of PW cheer you up? 'Cause I'm working on it as we speak.
I'm very glad you've got Labyrinth and Captain America! (Iron Man 3 was fantastic, btw.)
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Kyndsie In reply to startraveller776 [2013-05-04 23:08:02 +0000 UTC]
Would another chapter of PW cheer you up? 'Cause I'm working on it as we speak.
Ummm... let me think real hard about that! Yeah!!!
I was going to try to watch Labyrinth tonight, but it actually works better for my mom for us to watch Captain America together this evening. (And I've heard! I've also already heard from multiple sources to watch all the way to the very end of the credits, so I hope that you did!)
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startraveller776 In reply to Kyndsie [2013-05-04 23:12:59 +0000 UTC]
Oh, I watched to the end--it's a Marvel film, after all. One does not simply leave the theater when the credits begin for a Marvel film. (I've actually seen the film twice now, lol.)
Enjoy Captain America tonight. (I'm thinking about rewatching that one soon, myself. But the first Iron Man is...first. I have to decided which is the best of the Iron Man films: #1 or #3.)
Okay, back to PW for me!
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Kyndsie In reply to startraveller776 [2013-05-05 01:39:38 +0000 UTC]
See! What boggles my mind is that it still surprises people that there's stuff at the end of any movie, but ESPECIALLY a Marvel movie! And hasn't it only been out for two days??? I'm totally jealous that you've seen it twice before I've seen it once.
I do really like the first Iron Man, but I also really like the Edward Norton The Incredible Hulk.
Happy writing!
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startraveller776 In reply to Kyndsie [2013-05-05 01:51:29 +0000 UTC]
And hasn't it only been out for two days??? I'm totally jealous that you've seen it twice before I've seen it once.
Yep. Went last night and today. (It was a happy accident, actually. I was invited by two different friends, so I said, "What the heck? I'll see it twice. It's Tony Stark!")
I will agree with you about Edward Norton. In fact, I was sorely disappointed when I first discovered that he wasn't going to be Bruce Banner/Hulk in "The Avengers." But I think Mark Ruffalo did a good job, so all is forgiven.
Happy watching of "Captain America" to you!
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Kyndsie In reply to startraveller776 [2013-05-05 01:59:52 +0000 UTC]
Ah. Well now... once this concert season is over (final concert is in one week), I'll have the time and energy to go out to the movies. IM3 is on the list to see!
Me, too! And ditto about Mark Ruffalo. I really appreciate how differently he plays it than Edward Norton does. Both equally valid interps of the character, so I can love each one without diminishing the other. (I admit to not being overly impressed with Ms Tyler as Dr. Ross, so I hope that they either don't bring that character back or recast it.)
It was wonderful. Again. (LOVE the post-transformation reveal, I must admit.)
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startraveller776 In reply to Kyndsie [2013-05-05 02:59:48 +0000 UTC]
LOVE the post-transformation reveal, I must admit.
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Kyndsie In reply to startraveller776 [2013-05-05 03:01:23 +0000 UTC]
It's very consoling to me, especially with my emotions being all haywire this week. And wanting to pout because of this highly-annoying cold!
And you can't truthfully tell me that you didn't like that scene!
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startraveller776 In reply to Kyndsie [2013-05-05 03:08:19 +0000 UTC]
Oh, I won't deny that it is very pleasing for the eyes, yes.
But I'm rather partial to Thor's shirtlessness, myself. I saw the film in the theater with my husband and accidently uttered under my breath: "Whoa!" The hubs heard and he's never let me live it down. Two years later and he's still teasing me about that.
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Kyndsie In reply to startraveller776 [2013-05-05 03:10:30 +0000 UTC]
We can admire the other one's hero, without having to share our own this way!
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startraveller776 In reply to Kyndsie [2013-05-05 03:11:24 +0000 UTC]
Agreed. This works out quite well.
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ithaswhatitisnt [2013-05-02 23:51:32 +0000 UTC]
I love this version of Jareth...he always gives me happy shivers. Fantastic work!
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Pirate-Yashimaru [2013-05-02 23:43:28 +0000 UTC]
love what you've done with it. well done as always. you have captured me perfectly.
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