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The wind was still on the cool Summer night and not a breeze came through the Forest. Mark uneasily looked at his watch and took it off. Letting out a sigh he began taking off his shirt and shoes. He set them safely inside of a tree and began double checking the surroundings to make sure no one was around. After all, he didn't want this thing getting out and slaughtering any living thing it came by. Already beginning to feel the stiffness in his muscles, he closed his eyes getting ready for what was about to happen.His hands started to twinge every time his heartbeat, with every pulse the pain got worse and more and more veins began to show in them. In a matter of seconds he began to feel a piercing underneath all of his nails and his fingers began to elongate causing his skin to stretch and tear. He yelped from the stinging sensation and jerked back onto a tree feeling his feet change. They began getting longer and began fracturing. When they snapped upward, causing a very loud crunch, Mark screamed in excruciating pain. Jet black razor sharp claws split through his nails as he lurched forward onto the tip of his feet feeling a burning throb in his ears as they stretched and elongated making a point at the tip. They started to become extremely sensitive. Mark fell to his knees but caught himself before he fell all the way down. He clenched his teeth feeling them grow as the enamel was tearing his gums causing them to bleed and an enormous amount of pressure was building up behind his face. He felt soft pads grow on the tips of his toes and the front sole and while looking at his hands, saw the same black pads growing on the tips of his fingers and front palm. Mark screeched on all fours when his spine compressed upwards making itself clearly visible beneath the skin. It pulsated and throbbed as it raised itself and pressed against his jeans, causing them to tear in the back as the vertebra began forming a tail. His muscles began expanding, making him stronger and easier to support himself on all fours. Getting off of the grass to the tips of his paws, with his spine still compressing, he doubled-over in pain feeling a torturous pressure in his core. It blazed with heat as he yelled in shear anguish as jet black fur began to rapidly grow across his entire body. It covered every part his feet except the padded parts and covered his legs causing his jeans to tear apart from the pressure they could no longer hold. It spread across his now muscular chest and covered every part of his arms and hands except for the padding. Stumbling back onto another tree for support he grabbed his fur covered chest feeling his lungs burn and expand and screamed out as they were becoming more durable and versatile. It was then he froze breathing heavily and petrified with fear from what he heard; faint voices in a distance laughing and talking. "People!?" Mark could only think to himself. "NO NO!" The pressure behind his face became excruciating and little by little it shot forwards, he roared in agony as fur began to cover the front of his face. His nose turned black and wet, becoming tremendously sensitive and his eyes changed from Dark Brown to Ice Blue. His face pushed out once again in excruciating pain, losing all concentration he once had. Roaring loud and powerfully his face, fully covered in jet black fur, shaped itself into a muzzle. "I C-Ca-!" Mark said struggling to control himself as his loud growls and snarls roared through the forest, but as soon as he caught a glimpse of the moon his monstrous side began taking over as his humanity slowly faded away. He gazed upon the aura of the white orb high in the sky and at the top of his transformed lungs howled a long-length horrendous howl that seemed to silence everything around. Catching the strong scent of the campers, he quickly sprinted his way on all fours to begin the hunt.
AND WITH THAT is my 3rd werewolf story. A male going through his 3rd transformation and (though he tries) still isnβt use to it. Hope you guys enjoyed ^^ Let me know what you think. If you ask me, I think those campers are screwed, especially when your facing something that runs 3 times faster than you.
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Comments: 9
DragonsGhostHeart18 [2010-12-14 01:29:57 +0000 UTC]
I LOVE IT!!! I LOVE, LOVE, LOVE IT!!!!
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kzmaster In reply to DragonsGhostHeart18 [2010-12-14 15:50:01 +0000 UTC]
Thank you J, I'm really glad you like it
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DragonsGhostHeart18 In reply to kzmaster [2010-12-14 16:33:02 +0000 UTC]
your welcome and i don;t like it, I LOVE IT!!!
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Renshi-the-fox [2010-12-14 00:10:05 +0000 UTC]
Now on this one I really liked the shading, big time.. the veins look awesome.
Though a bit of critique sorry D:
umm the foot paw...isnt the large thumg a bit farther than usual...I tihnk it should be a bit closer..In my opinion thought Its YOUR art not mine.
But despite that fact it looks awesome ooh and the moon could have a bit of craters like tiny circles or dots to resemble it more
enough critique My point Awesome, cool, sweet!
Well done!
WHOOO!!!!*falls down* x w x
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kzmaster In reply to Renshi-the-fox [2010-12-14 15:53:28 +0000 UTC]
lol thanks a bunch for the critique,It's very much appreciated man
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Renshi-the-fox In reply to kzmaster [2010-12-15 19:44:53 +0000 UTC]
heheh ^^ no problem
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