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Description 16 year-old Ty looked at his alarm clock after waking up in a cold sweat, it was 11:39 p.m. He’d been asleep for 5 hours and his parents had gone to bed. He had been feeling horrible ever since he was mauled by that huge animal yesterday. The only light in his house was coming from the full moon outside across the hall shining through the window. He sat up on his bed and wiped the sweat from his forehead and let out a sigh. He felt so dizzy, it seemed as if everything was spinning around him. He started feeling really warm and laid back down on his bed grabbing his head. “What’s wrong with me?” He thought to himself. The warm sensation started to slowly throb, it intensified to boiling and sweat began seeping out his pours. He groaned, his muscles became stiff and hard to move. ”Ow..Ouch!” His right hand began to ache, It felt like something sharp was pressing up against his finger nails. The pain pulsated and throbbed from his hands to his arms, every vein was showing and his arms felt like they were burning. “OW! What’s happening to-.” He heard a slight *Crack* and he let out cry of pain when he felt an overwhelming cramping from his hand. He held it up to his face, blood drips ran down from his thumb, a small black, sharp pointed claw had split through his thumbnail and was still growing. The same occurred for his left hand one slowly after the other. “This can’t be happen-- AUGH!” he said as the rest of his finger nails were split in two. Blood ran down the back of his hand. His hand was writhing in pain, when he looked at his palm it seemed swell and get darker at the midpoint, the same occurred at the tips of his fingers. They felt so sore. Loud *Snaps* were heard when his hands began to get longer, they felt like they were on fire. His thumbs started to shrink and the dark spots on his hand had swelled and pushed out.
The burning had moved from his hands to his feet. They began to snap and crack. “This can’t be real, I must be dreaming!” He cried out feeling a swift and very loud snap in his spine. It felt like he just broke a disc in his back. He let a few tears fall and tried to turn himself over to get up but couldn’t move, his muscles had become paralyzed as if they were holding him in place. His feet began elongating. They were constantly flexing and relaxing making a crunch sound every time they did. Blood began to fall from his toes, sharp black claws were splitting through them now and the same swelling occurred at the tips of his toes and sole. His feet flexed sharply upward causing a surge of intense aching then relaxed. Ty put his now paw-like hands to the side of him. His feet flexed upwards again this time causing a loud crack and they stayed place. The pain from it was excruciating and he yelled. The hair on his arms and legs stood up and went from a dark black to white. It started covering the back of his hands and feet and worked its way up. The parts the fur didn’t cover were the black pads on his fingers, and toes. His shirt tore to shreds and the same fur was covering his chest.
He used all his strength to turn over to his front. He managed to turn but fell of his bed and onto the carpet causing a humongous thud. He groaned, he felt more and more stiff crawling on all fours to his door. His spine moved upward again and cracked locking itself in place. He screamed and closed his eyes while clenching his teeth. The fur sprouted on his back and covered every part of him in front. “What’s happening to me!?” He yelled in agony.
His spine crunched this time at the base, it burned with intense heat and lengthened. It pressed up against his black pants and ripped them. It got longer and longer and began to get covered in white fur as it shaped itself into a tail. Ty’s gums became increasingly sore and began to bleed. His voice was getting deeper, more raspy, more….monstrous. He bent his head down feeling an enormous amount of pressure behind his face. His ears were burning with heat. His skin stretched out half covered in white fur. It felt like someone was pulling his whole face forward. ”Oooooh” Ty groaned in pain. It was becoming hard for him to think straight. His mouth began bleeding as his teeth began falling out and being replaced with razor sharp teeth and fangs. His ears shifted to the top of his head and were fully covered with fur. A loud SNAP was heard as his face began to pushing out. His monstrous voice roared throughout the house in pain. He moved his head from side to side trying to endure it but Snap after Snap his face kept pushing until it formed a snout. His eyes turned from dark brown to yellow. The pain was so excruciating he began losing all of his thoughts. He couldn’t think straight at all. “Help…M-ME!!!” He roared as his muzzle finished growing. Finally the transformation finished, the pain faded away. He was breathing so hard that he was growling every time he breathed out. He looked at the moon and couldn’t look away, seeing it’s beauty it’s light and found solace in it. He felt an urge coming from within him, wanting desperately to escape. He lifted his head up and as from the top of his lungs howled a long and terrorizing howl that shook the whole house.


This is something I just HAD to do. How many drawings do you see of a werewolf from a 1st person perspective? My guess is not many so I decided to make one ^^ My Photoshop was defected while doing this so I had to do this ALL Manually. No fill what so ever, just me and my mouse.
Let me know what you think about this, im new to this whole writing game.
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Comments: 62

kzmaster In reply to ??? [2014-06-22 19:09:05 +0000 UTC]

Like a director? Ha, this is alright. But the REAL thing coming in 2018 will completely blow this out of the water  

I guarantee that. 

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monstermaster13 [2013-06-23 00:50:18 +0000 UTC]

This is what I like in a TF, not only do you have it a unique perspective but also you have a nice detailed description of it. Top notch.

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kzmaster In reply to monstermaster13 [2013-06-24 04:59:59 +0000 UTC]

Hey thank you very much man, i appreciate it , Oh man I remember making this a long time ago. All i can think of now is, "Man, i can do so much better." lol

I just thought that since there weren't that many first person perspective of a Werewolf Tf, i might as well do one. Glad you liked it ^^

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monstermaster13 In reply to kzmaster [2013-06-24 05:00:31 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome.

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titanictane [2012-02-19 15:06:27 +0000 UTC]

wow so cool

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SilverZeo [2011-04-20 02:58:25 +0000 UTC]

... there are worse things to wake up to in the morning...

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kzmaster In reply to SilverZeo [2011-05-01 15:05:13 +0000 UTC]

Like Rebecca Blacks Friday song? lol

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rafaellomontenegro12 [2010-10-21 00:32:32 +0000 UTC]

you miss the muscle growth

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kzmaster In reply to rafaellomontenegro12 [2010-10-21 15:57:50 +0000 UTC]

True but
It all depends how you describe your way of the transformation, cause when does a 16 yr old all of the sudden have a 30 yr old body builder physique ya know?

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DreamingInfinity [2010-10-20 00:39:11 +0000 UTC]

I like this a lot! The picture made me feel like I was actually the werewolf.

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kzmaster In reply to DreamingInfinity [2010-10-20 15:46:18 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much for the feedback I'm glad you like it, yeah this would be cool/horrifying to see this happen. What do you think?

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DreamingInfinity In reply to kzmaster [2010-10-21 00:16:47 +0000 UTC]

Yea, I think I would have pretty good freak out. Haha! The next day I'd be wondering, "okay, what happened last night?" lol

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kzmaster In reply to DreamingInfinity [2010-10-21 16:00:24 +0000 UTC]

lol same here

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DreamingInfinity In reply to kzmaster [2010-10-21 23:50:08 +0000 UTC]

Haha!

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circadiangnome [2010-10-18 16:59:12 +0000 UTC]

cool pic, i iz not spam, pen tool ftw.
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kzmaster In reply to circadiangnome [2010-10-18 16:59:47 +0000 UTC]

Chris Ima hit you lol

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wolfboy1991 [2010-10-17 18:58:54 +0000 UTC]

LOVE THIS!!!! if only i could see that in person

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kzmaster In reply to wolfboy1991 [2010-10-18 00:53:28 +0000 UTC]

I know that would be so cool

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wolfboy1991 In reply to kzmaster [2010-10-18 14:55:23 +0000 UTC]

if you find a way to make that true promise to share it with me and ill do the same if i find one lol

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kzmaster In reply to wolfboy1991 [2010-10-18 17:10:00 +0000 UTC]

Haha definitely.

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wolfboy1991 In reply to kzmaster [2010-10-18 18:32:10 +0000 UTC]

X3

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Courtney-Rain-Stepz [2010-10-16 22:32:35 +0000 UTC]

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kzmaster In reply to Courtney-Rain-Stepz [2010-10-16 22:39:46 +0000 UTC]

LOL hahaha! So true.

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Courtney-Rain-Stepz In reply to kzmaster [2010-10-16 22:47:13 +0000 UTC]

LMFAOOO
I didn't expect that reaction. XP

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HaraKiri523 [2010-10-16 16:54:56 +0000 UTC]

What a cool perspective!! Very good

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kzmaster In reply to HaraKiri523 [2010-10-16 19:22:47 +0000 UTC]

Thank you ^^

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Akeem-J [2010-10-16 16:27:19 +0000 UTC]

This is really cool. This is really nice perspective. Keep it up!!

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kzmaster In reply to Akeem-J [2010-10-16 19:28:42 +0000 UTC]

Thanks a bunch for the feedback bro

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emlisttar [2010-10-16 08:50:53 +0000 UTC]

Cool story man ^^.

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kzmaster In reply to emlisttar [2010-10-16 15:08:20 +0000 UTC]

Thank you im glad you like it

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emlisttar In reply to kzmaster [2010-10-16 15:21:42 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome ^^. You've got better !

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kzmaster In reply to emlisttar [2010-10-16 15:28:38 +0000 UTC]

"I've gotten better?" Have you seen your art man, you've improved so much I was like "is this the same guy from 3 months ago?" lol

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emlisttar In reply to kzmaster [2010-10-16 15:44:40 +0000 UTC]

*Sniffs myself* Well. Thoughtfully some alien did changed me XD.

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kzmaster In reply to emlisttar [2010-10-16 19:19:45 +0000 UTC]

lol

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emlisttar In reply to kzmaster [2010-10-16 22:58:45 +0000 UTC]

XD

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PM-Kitty [2010-10-16 06:23:18 +0000 UTC]

Very cool! Nice perspective ^^ I love the transformation description

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kzmaster In reply to PM-Kitty [2010-10-16 15:09:10 +0000 UTC]

Thank you ^^ Your feedback is much appreciated

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little-crow [2010-10-16 03:30:40 +0000 UTC]

First thing that came to mind: woaaawh perspective. xD
I loved the story, you are definitely getting me into werewolves, KZ. lol
That would definitely be a scary (and painful D: ) thing to wake up to.
The perspective looks spot-on and the hand is looking pretty sweet.

Haha, improving in leaps and bounds, you are, young skywalker.
/star wars nerd

gonna go fave this

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kzmaster In reply to little-crow [2010-10-16 05:23:08 +0000 UTC]

*Takes mic*
Ay little crow ima let you finish, but Starwars was the best movie of all time.
XD

Thanks for the fav L, yah that would suck to wake up to that. Hmmm I wonder if his parents heard the howl? lol

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little-crow In reply to kzmaster [2010-10-16 23:34:33 +0000 UTC]

Haha, agreed! It took me until last year but my
dad finally nagged me enough to watch them and
I enjoyed them throughly, all of them. xD

If they didn't, they must be very hard sleepers.
Or deaf. Or both. xD

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kzmaster In reply to little-crow [2010-10-17 00:26:49 +0000 UTC]

lol

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Songteller101 [2010-10-16 01:35:17 +0000 UTC]

thats awesome! I dont think ive ever seen a first perspective view picture, let alone a werewolves perspective! XD

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kzmaster In reply to Songteller101 [2010-10-16 01:37:50 +0000 UTC]

Haha glad you like it

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Songteller101 In reply to kzmaster [2010-10-16 01:57:19 +0000 UTC]

^^

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r3stl3ss-orange [2010-10-16 00:11:13 +0000 UTC]

Bravo! Being a werewolf is so...free...

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kzmaster In reply to r3stl3ss-orange [2010-10-16 01:25:41 +0000 UTC]

Haha so true so true

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6pathsofpain [2010-10-16 00:09:33 +0000 UTC]

damn dude! pretty good w/ the writing portion, but i think theres too much blood. i mean i luv it, but bloody hands and splitting nails, bloody feet and splitting toenails, bloody gums, y not just make his ass all bloody when the tail breaks his skin and grows?

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kzmaster In reply to 6pathsofpain [2010-10-16 01:25:26 +0000 UTC]

That's true and I'm glad you like it.
I usually just base my tfs off Lobo Leo's and An American Werewolf in London's type of tf. I can send you a link if you want?

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6pathsofpain In reply to kzmaster [2010-10-16 02:00:36 +0000 UTC]

nah. although i would be happy if u read and commented on my tf stories!
[link]
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kzmaster In reply to 6pathsofpain [2010-10-16 02:04:30 +0000 UTC]

ok ill get right to it

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