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Published: 2006-03-09 04:36:52 +0000 UTC; Views: 747; Favourites: 15; Downloads: 101
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starbucks bottle, paint brush, and my french paper.voila.
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Comments: 8
There's something about this photo that is really captivating. The color really gives it a nice effect
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I really like how the flow of the writing adds dynamic to this shot, it also makes sure the eye goes towards the bottle even though it's not in focus which is a good way of creating a balance and interaction of different technical aspects
I'm not exactly sure the harsh orange is the best way to go - I think toning it down a bit would bring a more mellow, calm atmosphere which I find more appropriate for this concept. However, the grain itself is just spot-on for a shot like this - it conveys mood and makes the shot more realistic, polishing that up would destroy an important aspect.
So overall it's a well-executed photo of an interesting concept, good job
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The perspective is strange because of the bottle. It's irritating me but in a good way.
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I'm a bit unsure about this one, the contrast is way high and it's not the best quality. Then again, I don't know what you were going for. I'm not a photography person so you can easily say 'fuck off' to my critique.
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Umm, ok I'm sorry I'm commenting twice, I just wanted to let you know I featured it here [link]
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