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Published: 2004-07-15 00:32:30 +0000 UTC; Views: 139; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 18
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Description This is another character from a comic I'd like to write and draw someday.
It'll be my own take on the whole fantasy genre. Don't have a title yet.... ^^

I don't have everybody's personalities nailed down just yet. When I do I'll edit them to include everything. XD

I will say this however... of all the characters for this comic, Falcon's my favorite.
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Comments: 4

Madeline-nite [2004-07-15 02:03:42 +0000 UTC]

i love his wings i want him

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Semiramis [2004-07-15 00:42:41 +0000 UTC]

I wanna hug him.... XD

Very lovely anatomy; the detailing of the chest and limbs is, while minimalized, very accurate, and what isn't drawn is suggested very nicely (I don't mean anything perverse by that, btw >.<. You also did the basic shape of the wings quite well (which is something a surprising number of artists miss.. -_-); perhaps a little more detail (e.g., feathering-out of the tertiaries) would help, tho. Color-coordination, character design, and general composition is quite appealing ^.^

hmm... biggest suggestion is perhaps add more detail here and there, and don't be afraid to make the hair a bit messier and more mobile. Anatomy-wise, i'd say your weak point is probably hands and feet.... but that's just about everyone's weak point, except a few lucky geniuses, so that can probably pass unnoticed for now ^.^v

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LabCreatedRuby In reply to Semiramis [2004-07-15 01:37:50 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the tips. ^^
First true constructive criticism I've ever gotten on devART.
Hopefully I've improved some since I drew this 4 years ago, but you're right. I often have trouble with the hands and feet.
New Rule: ALL anime characters MUST wear mittens at all times. XD

Lovin' your avatar, btw. That's fantastic.

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Semiramis In reply to LabCreatedRuby [2004-07-15 18:11:07 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome. I try ^.^v

...oh, you drew this four years ago? Wow. I completely missed that, sorry... XD

And thanks about the avie... I'm all too familiar with Engrish. My father uses it all the time... >.<

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