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There's a part in this story where one of the witches uses, a sort of hallucinogenic spell on a victim, there's a little more to it than that but, I don't want to give too much away. Anyway, when using it her eyes don't really glow, like I have used in other stories, but more sparkle (⇧⇧see above⇧⇧).As you can see it's quite creepy plus not at all sexy and even though the spell is only used once, it's used for quite a while.
So here's my question:- Do you want me to use it through-out the spells use, or just once at the start, then her eyes go back to normal?
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Comments: 20
voraphile70 [2014-03-19 04:54:15 +0000 UTC]
I honestly think the effect would look nice throughout the use
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shahlukhmhan [2014-03-04 16:29:48 +0000 UTC]
throughout is better, to the point that the spell breaks him, confusing him to what he wants..
I'd figured its kinda sexy~
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AndurilWielder [2014-03-04 16:21:09 +0000 UTC]
I'd like it throughout. I think it'd look good tbh.
Also I'm anticipating more pictures from you X3
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TimotheousTheGreat [2014-03-04 01:58:21 +0000 UTC]
yeah, probably just the start would look better. just so the viewer can tell when something has happened/started
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Andruril93 [2014-03-03 19:54:53 +0000 UTC]
Hmmmm...I don't know. I like the effect, but I can't really decide. Though, if I had to round it off, I think I'd go with using it all the way through. That might give the spell a little more attention. Like, the viewers might be more aware of it's presence.
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Davbor45 [2014-03-03 13:57:41 +0000 UTC]
Use the effect more, make it seem as if the victim is either in a dream or other state of reality.
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Labean In reply to Davbor45 [2014-03-03 19:28:36 +0000 UTC]
Have you hacked my PC? Yeh he gets hypnotised into thinking he's somewhere else and forgets where he was.....or is.....you get the idea.
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DarkJedi1701 [2014-03-03 12:42:56 +0000 UTC]
just to get things straight, we're talkin' giantesses here, right?
Now all tell me, honestly, if the absence of a little glow in this giantess' eyes would stop freakin' the shit out of you if you were in this guy's place. Look at that evil smile!
I mean, really, gimme a break!
I really would keep her eyes this way throughout the scene, and from the storytelling perspective, it would make more sense that as long as the spell lasts, her eyes remain that way.
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Labean In reply to DarkJedi1701 [2014-03-03 19:28:40 +0000 UTC]
Lol, I enjoyed reading this comment. You're right though, there's a giant woman who wants to eat you, yeeh that's fine, but HOLY FUCK look at her eyes!! Now it's scary!! But it's more what the viewer wants to see rather than what's scary. Trust me for the most part all the little guys are scared, as they should be.
Thanks for your comment though, it cheered me up
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xiao-renzhe [2014-03-03 10:19:48 +0000 UTC]
Call me devil's advocate, but I like the eyes. I say let em run the duration of the spell. Just seems appropriate. Great effect! And wonderful work as usual!
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Silversepiroth [2014-03-03 01:00:52 +0000 UTC]
I kinda like the eyes, but I can understand how they'd be creepy to other people, so I say just once
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BrotherVirgil [2014-03-02 23:34:15 +0000 UTC]
Doesn't really look creepy to me, but just-at-the-start actually makes the most sense as a storytelling device.
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Labean In reply to xavos23 [2014-03-02 21:57:03 +0000 UTC]
I rendered a few yesterday with the "Freaky Eyes" and Carey was beginning to scare the shit out of me. But I'll let this run overnight to try and get a good chunk of feedback, but I can see me having a bit of spot rendering to do.
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House-of-Characters [2014-03-02 21:37:38 +0000 UTC]
I would prefer just at the start honestly. I think this technique is less evident then glowing and I kinda like it, but I also love their big, sexy eyes and I would love to see them normally during the story. Hope to help you with my comment Great work!
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Labean In reply to House-of-Characters [2014-03-02 21:59:22 +0000 UTC]
Cheers buddy. Only had two comments but I think most people will feel the same as you.
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