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lackofevolution — Thoughts In Liguid Form
Published: 2011-11-29 07:55:07 +0000 UTC; Views: 515; Favourites: 15; Downloads: 7
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Description I stare at my arm with anger for I know that it can't contain,
The reactions to my past, the assumptions hiding in the dancing rain,
Don't say that you care, don't you dare begin to stare,
My skin shakes, there's only so much it can bare,
Don't say for me you have hope,
Trying to hide, my tears can't cope,
Don't say that u feel, don't say that pain can heal,
My skin shakes, only one perception can be real,
Don't say that for me you have lust or love,
Trying to hide, the gun waiting to shoot the white dove,
Don't say that there isn't shame; don't say there isn't blame,
My skin shakes; I notice the forgotten cigarette butt and know we're the same,
Don't say the past doesn't matter; I'm the six foot son,
Trying to hide, the bullets are not in my gun,
Don't say that your right, don't say it will pass with the arrival of light,
My skin shakes, knowing what will happen alone at the end of the night,
Don't say my perception is strange,
Trying to hide, as a reflection and its creator exchange,
Don't say that you know my life, don't understand my knife,
My sin shakes; I don't have parents, children or a wife,
I stare at my arm with anger for I know that it can't contain,
The thoughts in blood form rising to the surface, my pain.
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Comments: 15

A7XFan666 [2011-12-07 21:32:46 +0000 UTC]

Amazing

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LovelessCrosseria [2011-12-02 07:15:34 +0000 UTC]

don't know what really to say, this is a good poem really shows how you feel. And I hope I'm not too much trying to understand how you feel, if that is so then I'm sorry

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lackofevolution In reply to LovelessCrosseria [2011-12-07 05:56:06 +0000 UTC]

bt trying to understand me and my emotional thought patterns show that u care for people, its a good quality, it proves to me and hopefuly u that ur a good person

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LovelessCrosseria In reply to lackofevolution [2011-12-07 06:02:07 +0000 UTC]

Thank you but please tell me if it is too much

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lackofevolution In reply to LovelessCrosseria [2011-12-07 06:04:35 +0000 UTC]

t have anyone in my life that cares for me, yes people say hi how r u but thats not the same as what you have done, u make me feel like im not invisible

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LovelessCrosseria In reply to lackofevolution [2011-12-07 06:10:31 +0000 UTC]

I'm missing words, thank you, it ally means alot to hear

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lackofevolution In reply to LovelessCrosseria [2011-12-07 06:30:25 +0000 UTC]

i have words but there not enough to say thank u i appreciate u and ur words. i hate life but cos of u i dont hate coming on here

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LovelessCrosseria In reply to lackofevolution [2011-12-07 06:56:31 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, don't know what else to say. To me you are also one of the reasons for me coming here, I'm always looking forward to write with you (even just a little) and to read your poems

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12redroses [2011-11-30 08:11:00 +0000 UTC]

I have read a lot of your poems and this has to be one of my favorites. When I read it I can hear the anger in your words. This is fantastic.

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lackofevolution In reply to 12redroses [2011-12-07 05:54:03 +0000 UTC]

thanks i guress but ur right for this was written with anger instead of thoughts, i just reread it and it seems strange to me, almost like someone else wrote it, for those emotions dnt live in me at this momment

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xelanesque [2011-11-30 06:48:47 +0000 UTC]

I really don't know what to say when I have red this, I had no idea how strongly u felt about what people say

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lackofevolution In reply to xelanesque [2011-12-07 05:54:44 +0000 UTC]

people should only give words that they mean, should only give words that they will try to fight for their meaning

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crazylacey [2011-11-29 12:26:03 +0000 UTC]


sorry for the hug I show somtimes to much smypathy.I dont nkow if thats a bad tihng.

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lackofevolution In reply to crazylacey [2011-11-30 00:05:00 +0000 UTC]

dont say sorry u words like ur hugs mean alot to me

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crazylacey In reply to lackofevolution [2011-11-30 00:06:04 +0000 UTC]

really thats good.if you every do want to talk.I'm always here for you.

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