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muffinonie [2010-03-01 03:39:29 +0000 UTC]
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Impact
First off, the thing that strikes me most about these piece is the fast motion you portray with the colors. They almost look splashed on.
I love the thick black lines, and vibrant colors, and the way some of the colors drift outside the lines.
Additionally, the diagonal alignment of the character gives it an even more dynamic effect.
The color choice is stunning.
The only thing I'd say is the perhaps the pinkish lines are distracting from the character a bit. They also look a lot more crisp that the rest of the drawing.
It would've been neat to see some kind of splattering effect coming off the wings instead of clean lines.
Normally I'd suggest adding a background, but in this case, I think it would only detract from the overall effect of the piece.
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LadderToTheSun In reply to muffinonie [2010-03-01 03:44:34 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much.
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muffinonie In reply to LadderToTheSun [2010-03-01 03:48:32 +0000 UTC]
No problem at all! I'm so so sorry it took so long! But I kept that comment in my inbox to keep reminding myself
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LadderToTheSun In reply to muffinonie [2010-03-01 03:50:02 +0000 UTC]
I feel special <3
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XxNoStoppingNowxX [2010-02-26 00:26:49 +0000 UTC]
that is amazing
i like the spaltters and the feathers and the color and the lines and the angle and the magical pose.
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LadderToTheSun In reply to XxNoStoppingNowxX [2010-02-26 02:52:39 +0000 UTC]
Wow that's alot of like.
thx<3
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TwilitheWolf [2010-02-19 02:52:43 +0000 UTC]
I'll crit.
Well, everything seems good over-all, but I think you could have made the ears a bit larger in size. Other then that, everything seems fantastic in this.
The movement and the wings, just lovely.
Keep it up, your work keeps getting better and better.
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T-MAN16z [2010-02-17 20:47:57 +0000 UTC]
I can't do crits, I'm too nice in them XD
But this is absolutely fantastic c:
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Astra-wolf [2010-02-17 14:32:37 +0000 UTC]
Wow... This is like... the most beautiful vent I ever saw
Colors fascinate me the most, amazing <3
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PrepareForImpact [2010-02-17 07:27:10 +0000 UTC]
FUCK YES
THIS LOOKS AMAZING!!
Wonderfully done
Colours look fabulous!!
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LadderToTheSun In reply to PrepareForImpact [2010-02-17 16:27:40 +0000 UTC]
omg.
lol
thanks<3
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wolfforce58 [2010-02-17 06:43:20 +0000 UTC]
I'm no good at critiquing, but I've gotta say that this (along with your other vent arts) is just stunningly good...and if it's a good vent for you, then that's awesome. Something is just so appealing about it...perhaps the colors? I don't know..but either way, wonderful work.
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LadderToTheSun In reply to wolfforce58 [2010-02-17 16:27:48 +0000 UTC]
thank you so much.
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