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Description
Name: Kari MicheruGender: Female
Hair: pale brown-blonde
Eyes: right yellow left blueish
Height: 5’7
Weight: 176
Age: (look) 19 (rl age) 190
Birthday: Jan 26
Sign: Aquarius
Personality: she is crazy , a tease , loves taking advantage of ppl , flirtatious , twisted but overall loves having fun(i add more later)
Sword: nodachi
Shikai: Gen'ei no ōjo (Phantasm Princess). It takes the shape of a nodachi that she wears on her back.
Shikai: Her zanpakuto is released by the phrase "Fool Your King!" When released it takes the form of Halbeard
Bankai: Bankai: Bunki Kyoten ( Branching Stronghold): By moving her had along the blade of her Halbeard and stating bankai a burst of green light envelops Kari body and green symbols appear onto her body.(i explain more later) Her Halbeard transforms into Yari-straight headed spear.
Tremendous Strength
Enhanced Speed
Monsterous Durability
Squad: 3
Seat: Captain
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Comments: 8
DukeMarazh180 [2014-09-22 07:49:20 +0000 UTC]
very nice candy, yes there is some twicking in her abilies here or there but one hell of a good start bravo
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Ladycandy2011 In reply to Crimson-Agony [2013-07-12 02:00:00 +0000 UTC]
thank you im still learning how to color tho
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Crimson-Agony In reply to Ladycandy2011 [2013-07-12 02:05:53 +0000 UTC]
That's fine, she still looks good :3 and my only concern is that her powers might be a bit overpowered. Like, the lightning tree that pierces anything? And in Shikai no less. That seems OP. If you want I could try and help you balance her powers.
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Ladycandy2011 In reply to Crimson-Agony [2013-07-12 02:13:42 +0000 UTC]
sure i didnt know what to put lol
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Crimson-Agony In reply to Ladycandy2011 [2013-07-12 02:18:15 +0000 UTC]
Well, first off you need to focus on element. Usually only one element per Zanpakuto. Is it electricity or plants?
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Ladycandy2011 In reply to Crimson-Agony [2013-07-12 02:25:47 +0000 UTC]
hmm ill be different from what i normally do so plants
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Crimson-Agony In reply to Ladycandy2011 [2013-07-12 02:30:27 +0000 UTC]
Alright, that's good. So you have your element. Now, usually Shikai has one or two abilities, maybe three and rarely , but those are possible. Bankai usually follows those same rulings. Also, usually most abilities have some form of weakness or other, ex. Limited range, easily destroyed, dispersed by reiatsu etc. So I want you to think up an ability that involves plants, following these guidelines.
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