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LadyChou — To Make a Point
Published: 2008-05-10 02:42:53 +0000 UTC; Views: 197; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 0
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In cursive fluidityPens paint a mosaic
Of Letters
Without pre-meditation
We end the point
Period.
The period is the muzzle
The captor of free thought
The prison of prose
We should be damned
To be dammed
Behind a wall of dots
A river of ebony
Impregnates the mind
Our child of everything
And nothing
A shadow bulges
In the bulge of infestation
One-thoused buzzing beatles carry
An idealist's disease
The water breaks
A million thought-up thoughts
Preemptive crosswords to cross
Smear and blend
Into one melted mass
Always wondered, always thought
If periods were to perish
If points concieved remained unmade
How dreadful, how beautiful
The black chaos would consume
The blank canvas of free thought
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Comments: 9
oops forgot to say in all my excitement. only thing I didn't care much for was the reuse of the word "bulge" in the same stanza but that's only cause I love synonyms like some kind of obsessed madwoman.
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lol you mulitlingual poetic devil!
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Apprarently, you can't push enter on this thing without sending it. Well then, you win this one DA...you win this one...^__^ I'll try and think of a better way to put it. Mucho gracias, Am-Am-sempai. Oh yes... mixed two languages. What!?
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It buuuuuuurns! My eyes! >__<
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Can you feel it? Can you?
That's right.
Jealousy.
I'm so green I could be the flipp'n Incredible Hulk!
*bangs head on desk before kneeling to your poetic powers* Seriously, gorgeous. I love chaos! I love you! *mwha*
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You did this in fifteen mintues? *seethes in jealousy*
Anyway, this is really beautiful. I loooove your imagery and the words you used. The subject is also pretty interesting, too. 
=Love!
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.___. I may have been exaggerating just a little. >_<
Thankies! I lovez your comments and your poetry, NelNel..and artwork too!
Yaaaaaaaaaay....-___-; headache...ouchies....
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