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LaggingPyro — Realization by-nc-nd
Published: 2008-06-10 10:37:12 +0000 UTC; Views: 145; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 0
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Description Sitting back, listening
playing back memories
bittersweet memories

I see your face,
angry at me.
I hear your voice,
yelling at me.

What did I do to have
enraged you like this?

Nothing...have I?

Teeth grinding
fists curled tightly.

That look on your face
amused from my guilt...


...amused from my regrets.


My only regret now,
is that I've said nothing,
done nothing

Nothing at all...
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Comments: 3

Shadows-Beginning [2008-06-10 20:10:45 +0000 UTC]

I think it's pretty good. Especially since everyone can relate in either position.
The one yelling, or the one being yelled at.

An even ammount of description and emotion.

I like it.

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LaggingPyro In reply to Shadows-Beginning [2008-06-10 20:35:21 +0000 UTC]

Glad you do.

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subsist-clandestine [2008-06-10 11:55:37 +0000 UTC]

This reminds me of a lot of things.
I had a poem similiar to this,
although I destroyed it.

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