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Laitma — Angel Dust - The Fall

Published: 2012-09-26 03:16:13 +0000 UTC; Views: 12466; Favourites: 410; Downloads: 152
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Description Final project from my Intro to 2D Animation class last semester--yeah, way back in May. Took me that long just to build up the courage/get enough distance from my own embarrassment to put this up here. In a way I'm still kind of proud of it: just seeing what I managed to do in, oh, 6 weeks or so? in a class I "took" just because I wanted to learn animation... but obviously, I bit off way more than I could chew, and realized just how far I still am from becoming anything close to an animator.

Please don't critique this for the animation or concept or composition; I know it's poor, rushed, cheesy and disconcerting. Most of it makes me wince. I know I really, really need to practice depth.
But, well... I guess, I just really wanted to show you this roughest version of the animation I WANTED to make. I did this for my final project because this is what I dreamed of every time I listened to this song. This is Ian's song, and Ian's beginning. I'm not even sure if I want to keep this idea--it's cheesy as hell, I know, but for now it's what I'm running with until I can come up with something better. The concept's gonna stay the same either way, because this has always been a story of the fall. For those of you who've been following Angel Dust (bless you guys, seriously), maybe this'll help illuminate something? I hope it adds a little to the story.

The song is "One Day You Will Teach Me To Let Go Of My Fears," by sleepmakeswaves , used with their permission in this animation. You can listen to the unedited version here , and even download it if you like! Thanks again to this band for letting me use their music; it's the whole reason this animation even exists.


For anyone who spotted the cameos, they are: ~shark-bomb 's Tudor, =theblackbutterfly 's Obizuth, and of course a Cris from AD . And yes, I did look up Treasure Planet's intro scene a million times, but no, this was not actually inspired by it. This is the beginning to my own story, Angel Dust: [link]

Put together with Photoshop CS5 and Toon Boom Animate Pro. Also available on Vimeo, here

Thank you everyone for the support, you guys are the best!!! ♥
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Comments: 455

TechnOkami In reply to ??? [2012-10-01 02:08:23 +0000 UTC]

Haha! I was right. >

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Osanagokoro In reply to ??? [2012-09-28 20:40:03 +0000 UTC]

Wow, incredible. Very enjoyable to watch--and the music choice was superb. I feel like another good title for this could be 'Icarus'. Seems to have slightly similar themes.

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Laitma In reply to Osanagokoro [2012-09-30 19:17:33 +0000 UTC]

Ahhhh, thank you so much for the super-kind comment!! The theme was intentional too, as this story of mine is kind of a modern Icarus retelling of sorts!

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Osanagokoro In reply to Laitma [2012-10-02 01:36:34 +0000 UTC]

My pleasure--keep on doing what you're doing. You're brilliant!

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Laitma In reply to Osanagokoro [2012-10-02 02:08:43 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!

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duskricorn In reply to ??? [2012-09-28 17:39:26 +0000 UTC]

this was beautiful. don't feel bad about this rough; rough's are roughs and are meant to look shitty. i'm sure you'll make it a lot better, and i'm not saying it's crappy at all. the music made a difference. the concept was simple and interesting. the sketches were my favorite to watch, which i tend to like more than finished projects. good luck and good job !

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Laitma In reply to duskricorn [2012-10-02 02:36:06 +0000 UTC]

Ahhhhh, thank you so much for the super-supportive comment!! I'm just still very embarrassed about showing my unfinished work, hahah, but I'm trying to get over that! Thank you so much for your comment!! ♥

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duskricorn In reply to Laitma [2012-10-02 15:49:49 +0000 UTC]

No prob! Don't be embarrassed to show unfinished work. Art is all about process, and the idea behind it. If you can portray that clearly, even behind sketchy figures, then your concept is strong. Don't let other ppl's not-so-helfpul comments weigh you down, but inspire you and push you to only prove them wrong. besides, the more you show your work, the more feedback/exposed you are to the rest of the world. i looked at some of your other art. not too shabby, but it has potential if this is your passion.... keep it up. don't fucking EVER let anyone stop you.

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Laitma In reply to duskricorn [2012-10-04 13:15:43 +0000 UTC]

Awww, thank you so incredibly much for the super, SUPER encouraging comment, dear!! I definitely will keep it up!! ♥

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silverwolf-song In reply to ??? [2012-09-28 17:06:21 +0000 UTC]

Sorry! Ignore that I had a bit of a crazy moment and my computer glitched or something! anyway, I really liked the concept of this. Though it was very sketchy at times, I still loved how you went into a little detail. You've got a very nice style when it comes down to it.

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Laitma In reply to silverwolf-song [2012-09-30 19:14:04 +0000 UTC]

Hahah no problem, happens all the time~ And gosh, thank you so much for the super-kind comment, I'm really flattered to hear that the concept worked, and I'm really honored that you like my style, ahh! ♥

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silverwolf-song In reply to Laitma [2012-09-30 23:32:45 +0000 UTC]

Don't worry about it! The pleasure's all mine! Just keep up the great work!

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silverwolf-song In reply to ??? [2012-09-28 16:56:44 +0000 UTC]

WOow!Srfng

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GhelikBlack In reply to ??? [2012-09-28 16:51:48 +0000 UTC]

well, it's better that some of the animation that's now on Spanish TV If you keep working on it and cleaning it up, I'm sure it will end up being incredible

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Laitma In reply to GhelikBlack [2012-09-30 19:10:35 +0000 UTC]

Ahahahahah, ohdear, that's a little worrisome... xD
And thank you so much for the kind comment, I'll definitely keep working on my animations!!

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elspatula In reply to ??? [2012-09-28 13:14:37 +0000 UTC]

It looks like a sketch to an animation ... and I love sketches

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Laitma In reply to elspatula [2012-09-30 18:58:08 +0000 UTC]

Ahhhh, thank you very much! I love sketchiness myself; I worry if I'll ever be able to create smooth, polished animations at times, hah!

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elspatula In reply to Laitma [2012-10-01 07:26:59 +0000 UTC]

I believe you can do! I bet you just have to take the time and make a shorter animation ... I bet you could finish this one, but it would be ... kind of hard

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Laitma In reply to elspatula [2012-10-02 02:10:18 +0000 UTC]

Gyahahah, right?? I'd need a monumental kick to the ass... >_>;;

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elspatula In reply to Laitma [2012-10-02 14:02:20 +0000 UTC]

Now I'm wondering how I could kick your ass in a gentle, motivating way through the internet ... brain overload!

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Laitma In reply to elspatula [2012-10-03 01:53:23 +0000 UTC]

Ahahahahah, ohman and don't I need that asskicking!! I wouldn't mind, hahah! What works best for me is a deadline and a lot of encouragement along the way--having my professor to constantly help me decide which scene should come first or how to frame something, that's part of what got me through.

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elspatula In reply to Laitma [2012-10-03 09:24:43 +0000 UTC]

Okay, I might still be able to help you a little ...


---------------
ENCOURAGEMENT
to be used in
situations of
need!
---------------


WOW! IT'S AN ENCOURAGEMENT TICKET

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Laitma In reply to elspatula [2012-10-14 20:05:48 +0000 UTC]

Okay, just wanted to let you know, I have this sitting in my inbox at all times and every time I scroll past it just makes me smile--thank you so much, hahahah! ♥

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elspatula In reply to Laitma [2012-10-14 22:46:22 +0000 UTC]

:*

I'm glad to be able to make you smile
You saying this really means something It kind of ... motivates?
Further enjoy your ticket!

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djinn98 In reply to ??? [2012-09-28 12:51:33 +0000 UTC]

This was a wonderful project. Even the animation and sketchwork added to the entire feel of the video. Thanks for sharing.

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Laitma In reply to djinn98 [2012-09-30 18:57:40 +0000 UTC]

Oh gosh, thank you for the super-kind comment, you're too kind!

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dynamite-factory In reply to ??? [2012-09-28 11:07:32 +0000 UTC]

wow, this is incredible *-* everything is so fluid and the concept is fantastic..

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Laitma In reply to dynamite-factory [2012-09-30 19:03:55 +0000 UTC]

Awwwwwwww, thank you so much, dear!! I'm so super-happy to hear that people like the concept/story! *-*

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dynamite-factory In reply to Laitma [2012-10-01 08:45:54 +0000 UTC]

no problem

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Vasekk92 In reply to ??? [2012-09-28 10:05:13 +0000 UTC]

Stuning!!!

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Laitma In reply to Vasekk92 [2012-09-30 18:47:21 +0000 UTC]

Ah, thank you very much!

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repO-Owl In reply to ??? [2012-09-28 07:25:19 +0000 UTC]

This is just amazing, it gave me a buzzing feeling through out the Vid

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sarani-chan In reply to ??? [2012-09-28 03:11:58 +0000 UTC]

wooooow this is awesome! i love the motion in this and when you couple it with the music it seems all the more epic

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Laitma In reply to sarani-chan [2012-09-30 19:03:35 +0000 UTC]

Ah, thank you so much for the super-kind comment!! The music is pretty darn epic, isn't it?? x)

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sarani-chan In reply to Laitma [2012-10-01 02:27:23 +0000 UTC]

yes very much so, and you animated it to go perfectly

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apricotsrock In reply to ??? [2012-09-27 23:51:18 +0000 UTC]

whoaaa so cool! it looked awesome with the flying and everything! it must have taken you forever!

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Laitma In reply to apricotsrock [2012-09-30 18:13:00 +0000 UTC]

Gyahahahahah, several weeks and a bunch of nights camping out in the animation studio, hahahah! Thanks so much man, it was pretty fun to make, tbh~ xD

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kori-hibana In reply to ??? [2012-09-27 23:50:18 +0000 UTC]

I really hope you finish this!!! :3

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Laitma In reply to kori-hibana [2012-09-30 18:12:25 +0000 UTC]

Ah, thank you so much for the kind comment, and for the +watch as well, I'm honored!!
I do have plans to one day complete this, thanks to all the encouragement I've received, so thank you! ♥

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Kero-sempai In reply to ??? [2012-09-27 20:00:30 +0000 UTC]

LAITMA
LAITMA WHY
SO MANY FEELS
AAAHHHHHLDSJFLDFJ

excuse me while I just
go for a minute

actual cognative comment later

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Laitma In reply to Kero-sempai [2012-09-30 19:40:30 +0000 UTC]

ASFHGKFNSKLNFKL
KERO
KER WHYYYYYYY ARE YOU SO SWEET TO ME AND MAKE ME SO INCOHERENT WITH YOUR COMMENTS WHYYYY
ahhh I-I'm seriously super-happy to hear about this from someone who's read some of AD hahahah! THANK YOU MAN YOU ARE THE GREATEST ;-;

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Kero-sempai In reply to Laitma [2012-10-02 02:16:48 +0000 UTC]

GOSH IT'S THE FACT THAT I'VE HUNG ONTO EVERY WORD/ART POST ABOUT ANGEL DUST THAT IT'S EXTRA EFFECTIVE
The backgrounds are beauuuutiful wow that city and all these super well-timed cuts and persPECTIVE AND IAN'S FACE OHLAWD and when he's flying THROUGH THE BUILDING CORRIDOR LKJDFLK GOSH THAT PART GOOOOSSHHHH
Number one and overall the motion, wow the motion is just impeccable. laitma you are so cool and you did a very very very good job

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Laitma In reply to Kero-sempai [2012-10-02 02:28:17 +0000 UTC]

AND GOOD GOSH WHY DO YOU HAVE TO LEAVE ONE OF THE SWEETEST COMMENTS I'VE EVER RECEIVED, KERO
S-SERIOUSLY YOU HAVE NO IDEA HOW MUCH YOU JUST MADE MY DAY, TELLING ME YOU LOVE AD SO MUCH AND THAT YOU READ THE STORIES, I CAN NEVER TELL WHO READS THEM S-S-SO I JUST
I LOVE YOU OHGOD LET ME CRUSH YOU (GENTLY) PLEASE GUWAAAAAUUUGHHHHHH ♥♥♥

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The-G In reply to ??? [2012-09-27 15:51:14 +0000 UTC]

Are you kidding me? You've been witholding stuff like this? It's amazing. My mind is blown! You had the viewpoint moving around the characters! AROUND THE CHARACTERS! The way it zooms in and out and rotates around...wow.

This is absolutely genius. If you saw this as a trailer you'd go "I must see that."

Though I think I can see why you'd be nervous about showing stuff like this. You already don't seem to see the genius in your static images...so you'd really not see the genius in your animation.

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Laitma In reply to The-G [2012-09-30 19:49:13 +0000 UTC]

Ffffffffffftttttt, ohman I-I-I'm sorry G, but, seriously, I just, augh, I'm always haunted by my embarrassment and this whole thing just fell so short of what I dreamed of... I just learned how far I've still got to go to be an anywhere-near decent animator, I guess... u_u;;

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The-G In reply to Laitma [2012-10-01 13:34:22 +0000 UTC]

But this is a work in progress. All animators begin by roughing out first and then adding and changing as they go.

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Laitma In reply to The-G [2012-10-02 02:09:22 +0000 UTC]

Hahahahah, in this case, tearing up 80% of this and entirely re-doing it... probably three times, as three seems to be the lucky number for me. 8(

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The-G In reply to Laitma [2012-10-18 22:20:39 +0000 UTC]

Well that's still pretty good. I've seen comic book artists who redraw their panels seven times before they're finished.

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Laitma In reply to The-G [2012-10-19 20:14:51 +0000 UTC]

Oh good god, I... I don't know if I could ever bring myself to scrap and re-do something THAT many times... @_@;;;

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The-G In reply to Laitma [2012-10-20 04:23:55 +0000 UTC]

A lot of it isn't scrapping. They just redraw it a lot. Do a sketchy version to start with and then redraw it over and over and over again until they think it's right.

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