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Published: 2017-02-11 02:32:47 +0000 UTC; Views: 983; Favourites: 30; Downloads: 2
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This drawing was to cute not to digitalize, and I'll b drawing like this more often, I honestly don't understand the pointy pony fazeΒSketch:Β sta.sh/01gyq3efh3yu
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Hi ^^ I am not being mean I am trying to help. Okey so:
The race: I'm not saying alicorns are bad but they are srenowned as over powered and "Mary sues" in the mlp fantom. I would suggest going for a unicorn or a legal use not both because that would mean you have the speed of a pegasus and they magic of a unicorn which isn't really fair. If you have a good back story that explains what happens for her to become an alicorn then OK but if not then maybe change it.
The colors: There is nothing wrong with rainbow. But maybe make it a little darker because a lot of people tend to use the pastel rainbow. Also the pink. Try making it darker or a different shades because the color is used excessively on the fandom. Also the wings,try making then just have one color rather than rainbow because once again it is over used.
The cutiemark: so I'm guessing her talent is drawing? Try making the cutie mark more unique like maybe do a paintbrush and small picture or a pencil and a hoof mark but the Palette is really over used for ocs.
Please do not have a go at me. I am trying to help
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Why u hate alicorn OCΒ΄s
They are cool!!! Why are u so selfish!!!
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ok try reading the whole thing. i said i don't think they are bad -_- if you want to comment then read it first
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I can't express with words how much I wish people would just stop comming from that goddamn CC video and try and give critisism that is recycled over. And over. And over. It's always the same thing. If you want to guve critisism then take something original and don't just copy paste everything CC said. I get that you're trying to help, but Lala said many times that she isn't gonna change it, so leave it at that.
And no I'm not whiteknight, but if I was Lala, I would be annoyed as heck that after months people still feel the need to go here and tell me no, this isn't good do it this way even if I've said that I don't want to change it.
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Well i'm sorry but thats not the only thing. She claims bases as her own art and when people try to help she snaps and calls them names -_- all we do is try to STOP her from getting hate.
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You are aware that that was nearly a year ago??? She madeaΒ journal about two months ago where she explained that this is old case and that she already apologized, but she apologized again admitting she was wrong in the past. She almost stopped using bases and if she does she credits them. If you check on a lot of her old base art there was added credit. You want her to change but you are not giving her a chance to change. What more do you want?? If you don't like her OC, no one is forcing you to be here. You know it very well that neither you or CC are trying to help. You just want to come here to say something negative becase oh everyone else is.
Do not get me wrong. Critisism is life. She even said she is open to critisism. But if your intentions were good you wouldn't 1. recycle something that was recycled over and over just because CC said it and 2. you wouldn't act like what happened months ago is still accuerate. CC are just a bunch of loosers who have nothing to do other than sitting in a skype call for hours and make fun of OCs. Pretend that it's critisism all you want, but when they find a bad OC they deem her a mary sue after reading like 2 lines and procceed to make fun of it until the end of the video.
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my intent was good -_- i wanted to help her. i wanted to help her stop getting hate. If you actually read anything i wrote you would know i was trying to help.Β
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I understand that. But her getting the same critisism recycled over and over is not helping.
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because its what she needs to do. Everyone repeats it because 1:She doesn't do it and 2: It's the same because everyone has the same problem.Β
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Again. She changed. She stopped using bases and she stopped snapping at people and APOLGIZED. Like, what more do you want??
Oh so she is now an awful human being because she doesn't want to change her OC? It's her OC, she is open to critisism, but she simply doesn't want to change it. She admits her OC isn't perfect, and again, you can critisize it, but say something ORIGINAL for once and stop recycling everything others said. You also just admitted that you aren't doing it to help her but because you are triggered over her OC being something you don't like.
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i never said she didn't. I know she changed. You commented on a comment that was a year ago. Maybe if you minded your own business this conversation would have been avoided. I have better things to do than argue with a kid who thinks i am being a bitch.
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"maybe if you minded your own business this conversation could have been avoided"
wow, hypocrite. Well maybe if you minded your own business instead of commenting on other people's OCs that you don't like this conversation could've been avoided.
If you have better things to do why are you doing it then?
What makes you think I'm a kid? I'm not your angsty teen bitch who cries in her room because someone gives her critisism.
I'm just pointing out that you aren't trying to help, and that you basically admitted it.
But whatever I will let you do your "adult" stuff
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I'm not an adult. And i was trying to help. The oc's colors were horrible and overused. The alicorn heritage is also overused. All i was saying was that alicorn ocs were frowned upon in the mlp fandom. You can ask anyone and they will agree. They shouldn't be used as OCs because they are supposed to be rare and Princesses. and if they are princesses they are OP. Most alicorn ocs are mary sues. If you googled Mary Sue they will mostly be alicorn. All i was doing was helping her with choosing one of the other races instead of all three -_-
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So what you are basically saying is what dozens of people before you said...? Well if you bothered to check there is an explanation why she is an alicorn in the newΒ bio, and a really valid one at that. Again. She said she is not changing it and you know it. So whats the point of commenting?
What you are saying is that having an alicorn OC automatically makes it a bad character.
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i never said that. I said having an Alicorn oc gives you a bad rep.
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But the fact that you said "it's because everyone has a problem with it" doesn't change, meaning that it's not about helping anymore but about you having a problem.
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cute, but just a few improvements should be made, for example the legs (if you are putting them up like shown) need some fixing, but overall its great
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the drawing itself is awesome but the left hoof is off a bit
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That left hoof is really off compared to the others,,
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HOW ARE YOU SO GOOD WITH THE MLP STYLLEEEE TEACH ME YOUR WAYSSSSSS
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Well, I'm self taught, I think since I was.. three or four? idkΒ
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Just always draw mlp and also what program do u use because it might be a program too
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