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lalunafelis — Routine view 8
Published: 2010-07-21 05:07:53 +0000 UTC; Views: 2614; Favourites: 13; Downloads: 38
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The last part. Curling up into the box and getting carted offstage....sorry, can't think of any witty words to describe it.Related content
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Very beautiful work, the routine 1-8 seems like a stop motion picture ( ok, some pic are disappeard ) only the last-view 8- why such a great box for this small girl? In my mind she sliped in a tiny suitcase and she is carring away.
Hope you have some more nice ideas for your little contortionist.
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panel 7: another controlled fall, really.
So, this box is separate from her table. I assume it would have some relevance to the first half of the act.
This is the most well thought out choreography (in lieu of a performer) I think I have seen. With a few more descriptive marks, it could easily be a storyboard - not that I've seen many animators work with the subject.
Two other questions: How long is it the choreography supposed to take? What are the asterisk (*) markings for?
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Sorry if it took me four years to actually reply to your feedback. My life's been crazy lately.
Well, I took note of your critique/notes in the previous "Routine View" pics, and see if I can do anything about them. I do have another routine view in the works.
Honestly though, I have no idea how long the choreography is. I just threw in whatever my mind strung together from its stock of video samples, along with its own concepts. Maybe I should think of what soundtrack I should base the choreography on to get an idea?
The asterisk markings are for the panels that can be cycled/repeated BTW.
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