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Musical inspiration: "Bombtrack" by Rage Against the Machine [link]I am seriously really proud of how this one came out!
Ember Grizzly belongs to me *LancerWolf13
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LancerWolf13 In reply to ??? [2012-12-13 19:00:49 +0000 UTC]
Thank you for the critque! And yes, I'm aware that there is no shadeing, that was intesional. Once all of my characters reach this stage, I will go back and shade all of them. The reason being is because I am still learning cell shading, and I want to improve before I start using it. I'm sure it will look a lot better once shaded
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FlyingFreeFantasy [2012-12-13 02:07:07 +0000 UTC]
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Okay, first of all, I love the new style on her!~ Sexy beast is sexy~ >;3
Second of all, I like her flirty expression. It's sort of lazy, sexy, and playful... which plays off of her well~ The jacket is pretty kick-ass too. So jealous of the fact you were able to make that look so legit, so awesome.
Of course, if she was shaded, she would look even better e.deviantart.net/emoticons/let⦠" width="15" height="15" alt="
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But other than that, I see nothing wrong with this picture~ ^-^
Great job!~ e.deviantart.net/emoticons/h/h⦠" width="15" height="13" alt="
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Oz-kun22 [2012-12-12 23:02:10 +0000 UTC]
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Very well.
The clothing is good, gives look like Mechanic, combination colors were regular, the detail with the piercing tool and were good. Maybe if you attached more light and shade, the presence of the character would be more appealing. I had chosen another name, as Cassidy. I've seen many of your pictures in your gallery and you have pretty good ideas based on music, that is original but that means you have to express more of the song lyrics and rhythm leading. I would like to see more variety of characters not as dark colors, something else with a bright color and trying multifaceted characters.
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That-Paranoid-Zombie [2013-03-06 02:16:05 +0000 UTC]
she oddly looks like or if she were ever a sonic character Winry from Full metal Alchemist
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LancerWolf13 In reply to That-Paranoid-Zombie [2013-03-07 06:27:33 +0000 UTC]
You know, you're not the first one to say that XD
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eight0fhearts [2012-12-21 08:23:49 +0000 UTC]
I love this character, her design is awesome
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Dingo-Sniper [2012-12-13 07:33:42 +0000 UTC]
Out of all of your characters, I love the Ember the most. Her re-design for 2013 is certainly most awesome. I like how you've kept the majority of the parts that make her look best.
The only real thing I don't like about her this time around is the added green on her eye lids, I like how you have it on her hair but something about me just doesn't like it being on her eyelids. But that is really the only complaint I got. Apart from that, It looks great!
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LancerWolf13 In reply to Dingo-Sniper [2012-12-14 03:16:57 +0000 UTC]
I felt as though one green highlight wasn't enough... I wanted to show a bit more color, so I kept her eyelids green! This is where I got it from [link] Perhaps I'll add more green to even it out
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Dingo-Sniper In reply to LancerWolf13 [2012-12-14 03:19:53 +0000 UTC]
Oh yeah, I saw that picture a while back the Halloween contest.
Yeah, maybe even it out a bit because I think that might be why it looks a bit strange. But like I said, I still love her overall design
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LancerWolf13 In reply to Dingo-Sniper [2012-12-14 03:31:23 +0000 UTC]
Perhaps a green rag tucked in her pocket or tied around her leg... that would help a bit :3
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Dingo-Sniper In reply to LancerWolf13 [2012-12-14 03:35:03 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, something like that, I think a green rag around her arm might be better since it can restrict movement if on her leg.
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Sycotei-B [2012-12-13 04:58:45 +0000 UTC]
lookin' good, i like her bangs and piercings!
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LancerWolf13 In reply to Sycotei-B [2012-12-14 03:18:13 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! I felt as though Ember needed to be more "hardcore" and "in your face", I think just the few piercings did the trick! I'm glad you like it~
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Sycotei-B In reply to LancerWolf13 [2012-12-14 04:25:14 +0000 UTC]
no prob, they do work
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Carnivore2Die4 [2012-12-13 03:17:18 +0000 UTC]
I'm actually quite fond of the color scheme you used here. (Man, I missed so much; I just been gone for little over a week...)
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Drake-Constantine [2012-12-13 03:16:34 +0000 UTC]
Awesome character and fantastic design!
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Darz213 In reply to LancerWolf13 [2012-12-14 04:19:14 +0000 UTC]
I love the color and how detailed it is , think you can give me some tips
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LancerWolf13 In reply to Darz213 [2013-01-05 07:13:28 +0000 UTC]
Sure, what do you want to know?
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Darz213 In reply to LancerWolf13 [2013-01-05 16:29:27 +0000 UTC]
well what do you use and how did you do it . like did you just a paint bucket too and just added shading and highlights
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Tabersnack [2012-12-13 02:32:12 +0000 UTC]
I just want to explode because this is so amazing
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Tabersnack In reply to LancerWolf13 [2012-12-14 04:11:33 +0000 UTC]
but I must *explodes*
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xXJoshuaTheFoxXx [2012-12-13 02:17:45 +0000 UTC]
This reminds me of what's her name from the full metal alchemist series XD
Note: I dont watch you so I have no idea about the character, I just saw the picture, so dont hate me on that note :3
Looks great :3 and awesome :3
And everything else to go along with it X3
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LancerWolf13 In reply to xXJoshuaTheFoxXx [2013-01-07 21:12:15 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! She is actually one of the inspirations for this character :3
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Tonythunder [2012-12-13 00:28:26 +0000 UTC]
You did a friggin' amazing job drawing her man,I especially love the pose!!
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LancerWolf13 In reply to Tonythunder [2012-12-16 05:51:21 +0000 UTC]
Glad you like her! XD
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Electra-Blu [2012-12-12 23:18:43 +0000 UTC]
I loved watching you draw this...I adore Ember, almost as much as adore someone else.
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xXJoshuaTheFoxXx In reply to Electra-Blu [2012-12-13 02:18:35 +0000 UTC]
Awwwwwwwwww XD
Random reply from some one who watches your
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RPG-Panda [2012-12-12 22:50:55 +0000 UTC]
About time we see some more of her. I love the pic.
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LancerWolf13 In reply to RPG-Panda [2012-12-14 03:20:10 +0000 UTC]
IKR!
I think she'll be my pervy caracter... so Lance will be less dirty XD
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RPG-Panda In reply to LancerWolf13 [2012-12-14 03:31:45 +0000 UTC]
Hahhaha everyone loves a pervy character. I have several.
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Dash-The-Cheetah [2012-12-12 22:49:34 +0000 UTC]
Bombtrack of inspiration? BITCH PLEASE!
''Kiling in the name'' of RATM :3 :3 is better ^^U
anways, is a new character? why is so wonderfull ^//^ if i'll draw her, i always do it SO SEEEEEXXYYY... LIKE A DASH BOSS
PD: Good OC and very good music your listen too ^^
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