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As promised, I'll post all the parts over the next days/weeks. 


As you can see it's still not even the end of act II! Writing it all down made me realise just how big this entire project was.

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acetrainerclayton [2015-09-04 06:12:39 +0000 UTC]

why cancel it when it was at a huge cliff hanger -_-

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DragonetXime [2015-07-20 11:40:50 +0000 UTC]

Smells like a big fat lie to me... if they only wanted to prevent the mass extintion then there is absolutely no need to control the creatures.

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tailskofan999 [2015-05-18 00:20:38 +0000 UTC]

since red have forgiven apollo i will too.

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Miscomunication [2014-06-08 09:57:31 +0000 UTC]

...Finally getting to read all this... hngh *w*

Thankyou so much for even doing this, I can't WAIT to read the other parts~

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iid0rkz [2014-05-26 23:29:34 +0000 UTC]

can someone explain to me the whole thing about Oak being Sapphire's protagonist?

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Falling-Into-Chaos In reply to iid0rkz [2014-12-31 09:50:48 +0000 UTC]

This is probably at bit late, but Professor Oak is the protagonist in Landwalker's earlier nuzlocke that took place in Hoenn. If you reverse the generations, so there are over 600 pokemon in the beginning and only 150 in the end, you've basically got the more recent generations, with 600 pokemon which are slowly going extinct so there are only 150 pokemon in the end, which is what's happening here. In short, the generations have been reversed to explain how in the older regions like Kanto there are only 150 pokemon.

I hope this helped, I have a habit of overcomplicating things, sorry about that.

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DragonetXime In reply to Falling-Into-Chaos [2015-07-20 11:41:54 +0000 UTC]

If there was a 'like' option I would have clicked it on your comment XD

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necros7 In reply to Falling-Into-Chaos [2015-04-17 12:12:34 +0000 UTC]

THIS MAKES PERFECT SENSE

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Mesprit101 [2014-04-23 01:26:39 +0000 UTC]

>oak is sapphire's protagonist



10/10, that is amazing. Can't wait to read more; thank you for being amazing.

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Codiy [2014-03-31 21:02:00 +0000 UTC]

Did Avenger die from the fight with Rocket?

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sergeantnick98 [2014-02-28 03:09:43 +0000 UTC]

still cant believe oak was the trainer in the ruby/sapphire nuzlocke

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ReshyShira [2014-02-22 00:25:52 +0000 UTC]

Darn, such a shame to see such good plots go to waste.

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Kidforlife [2014-01-22 22:07:10 +0000 UTC]

WOW

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CoffeeIncluded [2014-01-21 18:50:14 +0000 UTC]

This is amazing. But what about Avenger? Is he the last of his species?

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SoraLove [2014-01-20 01:53:00 +0000 UTC]

Wow! You are great with plots!!!  Amazing story!!!!!

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MorganZephyr999 [2014-01-19 03:56:38 +0000 UTC]

Who did you replace Amy with though?

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KillerShark101 [2014-01-16 22:55:56 +0000 UTC]

Well... at least Giovanni is doing it for the right reasons.  

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YamaDoragon [2014-01-16 08:34:25 +0000 UTC]

Hah, I recall that some people guessed how Oak is your protagonist from your Sapphire run - and they were right.

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complete-herpderp [2014-01-16 05:34:24 +0000 UTC]

oh my fucking god

this makes me even more sad that you aren't finishing this

but i'm glad that you are posting the plot.

i hope you end up finishing it someday, or starting it over, or making a completely new and awesome nuzlocke. but if you don't, that's ok too.

thank you for meaning, emotion, and dr who refrences.

thank you, land-walker.

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Ileah [2014-01-15 05:51:23 +0000 UTC]

Oh shit, son. This is one epic tale. I love how Avenger was going to be incorporated, and the idea that the Pokédex controls Pokémon.

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Swanndroid [2014-01-15 05:00:22 +0000 UTC]

HOLY SHIT

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M-A-F-R-A [2014-01-15 01:41:38 +0000 UTC]

This is really awesome so far!

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songwithnosoul [2014-01-14 07:47:52 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for deciding to let us all know how the rest of the story goes!

It's great how you turned the wonky, retconned mess that is the number of Pokémon species in the games (only 150 Pokémon! No, 151! No, 251! etc.) into a major plot point. Why do the Gen 1 games have so few Pokémon? The rest are extinct, of course! While I'm not quite sure how Gen 2-6 evolutions of Gen 1 'mons factor into this (maybe they lost the ability to evolve in these ways?) it's still really neat.

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TheEbilBunni [2014-01-14 02:43:40 +0000 UTC]

Whoa this is intense.

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Ryua [2014-01-14 01:38:33 +0000 UTC]

Eeee, I'm so excited to see plot summaries! I like how it ties back to Sapphire.

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PandaSoup64 [2014-01-14 01:18:01 +0000 UTC]

This...is such a good plot line and it's not even over


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powermenz [2014-01-14 00:58:08 +0000 UTC]

woah... james and may??? wiat is mays middle name jessie or something????

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powermenz In reply to powermenz [2014-01-14 00:59:51 +0000 UTC]

scratch that oak is sapphire dude... but then where's may????

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LackadaisicalLeopah [2014-01-14 00:36:09 +0000 UTC]

Dang son, you got an explanation for everything. I'm impressed.


Don't mind me freaking out over the fact that OAK IS SAPPHIRE'S PROTAGONIST HOLY CRAP

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Aura-of-the-Emperor [2014-01-13 23:37:04 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.  Thank you for this.

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WithAQuillInMyHand [2014-01-13 23:15:59 +0000 UTC]

Wow...I really wish You would draw this out...but I understand why not.

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nebulartis [2014-01-13 22:43:27 +0000 UTC]

Whoa...just whoa 0.0

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Nia-Katomi [2014-01-13 22:38:46 +0000 UTC]

thats so awesome....

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FangOfDrknss [2014-01-13 22:35:35 +0000 UTC]

I'm guessing this whole Sapphire thing is a continuation from your other Nuzlocke? I'll have to read that one if that's the case.

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Leaffall-Novelist [2014-01-13 21:36:49 +0000 UTC]

Holy chips... you created a somewhat awesome plot here!

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Crystalicios [2014-01-13 21:21:15 +0000 UTC]

Wow I can't believe Oak is really Sapphire (er... nameless protag) Jeez, you really thought this one out! Makes me even sadder that you won't continue it as this story has got to be quite possibly the most intriguing plot I've ever seen.


Don't take that as a guilt trip though... I understand you don't want to continue it, but I am glad you're giving us summaries of the way this is going to conclude. Thank you for that. So far, the story is definitely shaping up into a massively excellent story.

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psychonator17 [2014-01-13 16:27:05 +0000 UTC]

*reads up to the part where Oak turns out to be the nameless protagonist from Pokemon Sapphire*

HOE LEA JEET

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FlyAwaySpark In reply to psychonator17 [2014-01-13 17:12:45 +0000 UTC]

Remember, player characters come in pairs. It's always a girl and a boy. Connected, but separate by time and fate.

So May I ask you?

Did you forget the other kid that was Oak's age in Littleroot?

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psychonator17 In reply to FlyAwaySpark [2014-01-13 17:34:24 +0000 UTC]

Not at all. In fact, I'm already wondering what happened to her.

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FlyAwaySpark In reply to psychonator17 [2014-01-13 19:14:16 +0000 UTC]

The same thing that happens to all of us: Time.

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eatpraylove [2014-01-13 16:06:57 +0000 UTC]

Oh wow. Oh, WOW. I was not expecting Oak to be the Sapphire protagonist! This is cool!

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Walory [2014-01-13 13:54:22 +0000 UTC]

Oh, so that was the name of Sapphire's protagonist... AMAZING!

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Tenshineko01 [2014-01-13 13:37:01 +0000 UTC]

This is awesome! And this is only the summary of the plot! dude this is going to be awesome.

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Kroki-op [2014-01-13 13:30:45 +0000 UTC]

Oh God the final part killed me. This is grand, GRAND.

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Velink [2014-01-13 13:16:17 +0000 UTC]

ooh wow! this seems pretty grand!

I am mostly curious of the importance of the pokedex tho

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DarkBlackArcanine [2014-01-13 13:14:06 +0000 UTC]

Mind Blown.

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FlyAwaySpark In reply to DarkBlackArcanine [2014-01-13 17:17:39 +0000 UTC]

You shouldn't be. You live in this world everyday. The finality of what will happen will make you realize things you never wanted to accept.

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DarkBlackArcanine In reply to FlyAwaySpark [2014-01-14 15:25:39 +0000 UTC]

.....Alright I'm lost here what the hell are you talking about? I was referring to how great the plot behind this was and not even sure what the hell ur refering too...

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ScribblySnek [2014-01-13 13:06:45 +0000 UTC]

...Good Arceus I can't even imagine the time it must have taken you to think this all through.

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DominoMastadon [2014-01-13 12:38:49 +0000 UTC]

O_O


Holy...Whoa....


Dude. I can't even...There are no words. None to describe how amazing this is.

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