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Published: 2012-02-11 03:42:01 +0000 UTC; Views: 441; Favourites: 14; Downloads: 93
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this is a sketch about taylor swift's new song "safe and sound" for the hunger games and what I'm trying to portray here is my favorite part of the song. In case what I wrote isn't clear it says: "don't you dare look out your window, darling everything's on fire" I love that part! so here it isRelated content
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skyworthy [2012-02-18 05:14:22 +0000 UTC]
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I think this Is a good piece You demonstrate wonderful technique with proportion reflection and shading. You have a talent for drawing water. Tears are very hard to accurately draw you've done extremely well with the reflection. I can see that behind the viewpoint is a fountain than a wall of yellow light. With context clues its probably fire. You have also Brought out emotion. Is she sad because she lost someone in the fire or maybe she just dismayed at the destruction she sees When you create art emotion is commonly the goal to show the viewer. Think of Picasso's Guernica He in protest to the German bombing of the town of Guerincia produced a piece that was dark all the subjects are in anguish or in pain. He also used a lamp and a candle in that same piece to depict hope. Your piece is just as emotional. Id have to admit though your piece is much more aesthetically pleasing than his. My complaint for this one would be the lines from the paper just seem to spoil the work I don't care for notebook paper because its so hard to get rid of those annoying lines. I think this would actually sell if you were to reproduce it on plain white paper. keep up the good work. Rise up! Soar on My friend.
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Larry-the-cucumber In reply to skyworthy [2012-02-18 22:50:57 +0000 UTC]
thank you, i'm glad you liked it. And about what you said about the paper, i'll try and make drawings without the lines, but i actually made it for my art journal and it counts as homework so i have to make it there. but thank you anyways!!!
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skyworthy In reply to Larry-the-cucumber [2012-02-19 01:33:26 +0000 UTC]
I understand there's nothing wrong with notebook paper I just find the lines frustrating. I think they are great pieces but would be better if you redid them on white paper or in a photoshop program.
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Larry-the-cucumber In reply to skyworthy [2012-02-19 03:12:56 +0000 UTC]
yeah, it frustrates me too hahaha, but i'll start to make drawings on normal sheets of papaer and hope it turns out ok
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skyworthy In reply to Larry-the-cucumber [2012-02-19 03:27:21 +0000 UTC]
like the duck I really need to complete the many half finished pieces I've got on Corel painter 4. unlike many other artists on this website I don't post W.I.P.S
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Larry-the-cucumber In reply to skyworthy [2012-02-19 03:36:45 +0000 UTC]
haha well finish your half drawings already! i'll be waiting to see them
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skyworthy In reply to Larry-the-cucumber [2012-02-19 03:40:38 +0000 UTC]
Now if only I could figure out the bug in my tablet
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Poppehtart [2012-02-14 01:07:22 +0000 UTC]
This is truly beautiful. I can't explain the feeling and depth in this.<3
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Larry-the-cucumber In reply to Poppehtart [2012-02-14 01:31:44 +0000 UTC]
thank you! i had a hard time trying to portray what i wanted, and i'm glad you liked it!
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Larry-the-cucumber In reply to maloriblackmon [2012-02-13 02:23:23 +0000 UTC]
thank you i'm glad you liked it
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Larry-the-cucumber In reply to boogrl721 [2012-02-13 00:36:10 +0000 UTC]
thank you! me too, i loove it
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wicked-turtle [2012-02-12 04:06:41 +0000 UTC]
yayy you uploaded it! so not "just a sketch", this is amazingg
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Larry-the-cucumber In reply to wicked-turtle [2012-02-12 04:15:22 +0000 UTC]
yes, it is a sketch and thank you
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Larry-the-cucumber In reply to AphroditeHalosydne [2012-02-11 22:05:26 +0000 UTC]
its not hahah it was a mistake. but i'll take it out of the group don't worry
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AphroditeHalosydne In reply to Larry-the-cucumber [2012-02-13 19:20:29 +0000 UTC]
oh i see aha XD np
very nice artwork btw! ^.^
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AphroditeHalosydne In reply to Larry-the-cucumber [2012-02-13 21:53:29 +0000 UTC]
your welcome :d
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MaximumRideWarrior [2012-02-11 18:59:52 +0000 UTC]
Omfg. I'm listening to that song right now. I love it, and this picture so much
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Larry-the-cucumber In reply to MaximumRideWarrior [2012-02-11 19:52:05 +0000 UTC]
thank you! i love it too!
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