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Published: 2004-02-01 17:07:48 +0000 UTC; Views: 1223; Favourites: 20; Downloads: 157
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Forgotten message on a wall,Discarded for eternity.
Its contents, nevermore revealed
Through winter, summer, spring or fall.
No light shed on important words,
Regarding true and honest love.
A fleshwound for a fragile heart
that hurt me then, that always hurts.
Will you come by to ease my pain?
Will I be ready, will I faint?
No matter what, no matter how,
You can't remove a bleeding stain.
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Comments: 16
fluxuspoem [2004-08-08 18:49:54 +0000 UTC]
Absolutey fantastic shot. I love the black and white choice the light focused on the hard surface its absolutely brilliant! Well done!
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BoatyBen [2004-05-03 13:04:59 +0000 UTC]
Great shot!
The label on the nail is quite "Alice in Wonderland" in its own dark way
I can imagine it reading "hit me"
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lastfuture In reply to BoatyBen [2004-05-03 22:54:01 +0000 UTC]
Hahah what a great imagination. Thanks for the fav! You made me smile
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gilad [2004-02-16 19:44:21 +0000 UTC]
Beautiful work!
The composition anf the still life give a lonely and hard life atmosphere. it doesn't really matter what it is, just how it feels. Brilliant
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lastfuture In reply to gilad [2004-02-16 22:00:55 +0000 UTC]
It means a lot to me that you like this. Yes, that kind of atmosphere is my specialty, I find it strangely appealing and aesthetic and I am getting better at expressing it through the medium of photography.
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gilad [2004-02-16 19:43:55 +0000 UTC]
Beautiful work!
The composition anf the still life give a lonrly and hard life atmosphere. it doesn't really matter what it is, just how it feels. Brilliant
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s0ngbird [2004-02-16 14:45:42 +0000 UTC]
amazing composition.. i really like this one, well done!
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insektokutor [2004-02-04 12:03:41 +0000 UTC]
wow
great!!
love the colors and the compotision :clpa:
loneliness feeling and a little hope, somone could read tis note yet
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lastfuture In reply to insektokutor [2004-02-04 16:24:37 +0000 UTC]
I'm so glad you like it.
The colors turned out just perfect, I didn't even have to edit a thing. Especially the blueish tone in the wood and the rust on the note in combination with the the soft shadows add atmosphere beyond my imagination.
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nubui [2004-02-01 19:32:24 +0000 UTC]
this is a most excellent shot! great use of spacing and beautiful comp!
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lastfuture In reply to nubui [2004-02-01 19:40:59 +0000 UTC]
Thanks very much, it always means a lot to me when you :fav+: one of my deviations, because yours are grrrreat as well.
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AntekPyra [2004-02-01 18:18:11 +0000 UTC]
wow...
great concept
focus is perfect, lighting too
thats my fav for today
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