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Published: 2004-02-01 17:07:48 +0000 UTC; Views: 1223; Favourites: 20; Downloads: 157
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Description Forgotten message on a wall,
Discarded for eternity.
Its contents, nevermore revealed
Through winter, summer, spring or fall.

No light shed on important words,
Regarding true and honest love.
A fleshwound for a fragile heart
that hurt me then, that always hurts.

Will you come by to ease my pain?
Will I be ready, will I faint?
No matter what, no matter how,
You can't remove a bleeding stain.
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Comments: 16

fluxuspoem [2004-08-08 18:49:54 +0000 UTC]

Absolutey fantastic shot. I love the black and white choice the light focused on the hard surface its absolutely brilliant! Well done!

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excessiveemotion [2004-05-06 21:27:26 +0000 UTC]

I love it and the title is great.

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BoatyBen [2004-05-03 13:04:59 +0000 UTC]

Great shot!
The label on the nail is quite "Alice in Wonderland" in its own dark way
I can imagine it reading "hit me"

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lastfuture In reply to BoatyBen [2004-05-03 22:54:01 +0000 UTC]

Hahah what a great imagination. Thanks for the fav! You made me smile

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gilad [2004-02-16 19:44:21 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful work!
The composition anf the still life give a lonely and hard life atmosphere. it doesn't really matter what it is, just how it feels. Brilliant

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lastfuture In reply to gilad [2004-02-16 22:00:55 +0000 UTC]

It means a lot to me that you like this. Yes, that kind of atmosphere is my specialty, I find it strangely appealing and aesthetic and I am getting better at expressing it through the medium of photography.

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gilad [2004-02-16 19:43:55 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful work!
The composition anf the still life give a lonrly and hard life atmosphere. it doesn't really matter what it is, just how it feels. Brilliant

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s0ngbird [2004-02-16 14:45:42 +0000 UTC]

amazing composition.. i really like this one, well done!

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insektokutor [2004-02-04 12:03:41 +0000 UTC]

wow

great!!

love the colors and the compotision :clpa:

loneliness feeling and a little hope, somone could read tis note yet

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lastfuture In reply to insektokutor [2004-02-04 16:24:37 +0000 UTC]

I'm so glad you like it.

The colors turned out just perfect, I didn't even have to edit a thing. Especially the blueish tone in the wood and the rust on the note in combination with the the soft shadows add atmosphere beyond my imagination.

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martello [2004-02-02 13:30:26 +0000 UTC]

Excellent shot.
My favorite for today.

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phaTe-oFF [2004-02-02 13:28:07 +0000 UTC]

Great shot.
- nothing more to say

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nubui [2004-02-01 19:32:24 +0000 UTC]

this is a most excellent shot! great use of spacing and beautiful comp!

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lastfuture In reply to nubui [2004-02-01 19:40:59 +0000 UTC]

Thanks very much, it always means a lot to me when you :fav+: one of my deviations, because yours are grrrreat as well.

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nubui In reply to lastfuture [2004-02-01 20:38:22 +0000 UTC]

hehe.. tx!

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AntekPyra [2004-02-01 18:18:11 +0000 UTC]

wow...
great concept
focus is perfect, lighting too

thats my fav for today

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