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Published: 2005-04-18 06:43:41 +0000 UTC; Views: 88; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 8
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Why do you do this to me?Just when I think I have you figured out
I’m left here guessing what you are about.
I don’t know what you want.
I don’t know what you need.
Sometimes I feel as though I don’t know you.
Is it true? Do you even want me near you?
Of course deep down you do.
You don’t want me close to you; because you’re afraid of what might happen.
We might kiss, we might embrace, and we might become more than friends.
Is that so terrible? Is that so horrible? That we might become something different in the end?
I have to tell you how I feel.
These feelings I have for you are so surreal.
I can’t wait!
I want you to be my mate.
I want to tell you... I love you and that’s the truth.
So... Why do you do this to me?
Why do I love you eternally?
Hopefully we will both find out eventually!
Comments: 15
Latestcraze In reply to alwaslgirl [2005-11-25 15:06:32 +0000 UTC]
Awww...Thank you very much!!
~~Portia~~
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FallenTear [2005-05-17 18:28:20 +0000 UTC]
beautiful piece... so sad but kinda shows hope at the same time
xx
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Latestcraze In reply to FallenTear [2005-05-18 00:02:49 +0000 UTC]
Yea...thanks!!
~~Portia~~
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AngolSakura515 [2005-04-18 19:32:58 +0000 UTC]
it is very deep and emotional.
I can't really express how I feel, so I'll do it this way:
Heart so deep,
listening tenderly.
I hear this watch outside ringing.
Is it so horrible if we become more than mere acquaintances?
My love for you is strong,
and it becomes more so by each tick of the clock.
Never ending story,
of all this anguish in my life,
you are there to heal my wounds.
Heart so deep,
I feel it within me,
Please say you love me, as I do you.
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That's what I got out of it. Hope it was right!
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Latestcraze In reply to AngolSakura515 [2005-04-19 18:34:04 +0000 UTC]
You read my heart!! LOL Thanks for the comment and I am glad you liked it...thanks!!
~~Portia~~
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AngolSakura515 In reply to Latestcraze [2005-04-20 21:07:47 +0000 UTC]
no problem
anytime!
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eclipz04 [2005-04-18 16:59:48 +0000 UTC]
I hate these kind of emotions. The ones that will drive you insane if they aren't resolved. Ugh, it's so horrible to stand. but yet, once everything is over, it has a sort of bitter-sweet feel to it.
Nice poem, very emotional. and I wish you the best of luck in these trials.
-brita
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Latestcraze In reply to eclipz04 [2005-04-19 01:56:53 +0000 UTC]
Thanks foe the love!!!
~~Portia~~
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angelscryrain [2005-04-18 15:28:01 +0000 UTC]
That is so odd.....I literally just wrote a poem about being in love with someone i don't know last night that I plan on posting today......wow...well yours is good and I definently feel that way at times
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Latestcraze In reply to angelscryrain [2005-04-19 01:54:36 +0000 UTC]
Thanks... I guess that's another thing we have in common..lol
~~Portia~~
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