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for a colouring contest hosted bylineart: [link]
contest journal - [link]
these two people
came off to me as like
dorky little sister and showoff big sister
one side is all :I and the other is like PARTAYYY
ahhah
wish me luck? ahaha i worked hard on this entry'
tools: corel painter x + gimp + wacom bamboo fun tablet
textures
[link]
[link]
and some from cgtextures.com [link]
BYE ilu ;D
lineart (c) ~pralinkova-princezna
colours (c) me i guess
PS
HEY YOU GUYS
ENTER THE CONTEST TOO <:
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Comments: 23
AnnieAnnieAnnie [2009-08-14 06:21:29 +0000 UTC]
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I would like to start by saying that the color really caught my eye. The way you made the colors match the personality and look of the characters I thought really made it look good. And the pattern put in it! I really loved that.
Something else I really liked was the clothing. The rights girls hat is amazing in my opinion. I've always loved eccentric clothing on characters. Her leggy-things (sorry about my poor English skills. Haha.) match and that makes it that much more exciting to look at.
Onto the left girls outfit, I really liked the style of her shirt and how her leggy-things matched it. Something else I found really appealing was the belts. Belts always look good if you use them right. They really suit her. And the colors of her outfit, they all seem to compliment each other.
I would like to point out a few things I think would have made this picture better.
There maybe should have been a few more creases in the clothing. As amazing as the clothes ideas are, I think they just needed a bit more detail. Like in the girl on the rights skirt, for example, I believe there should have been lines showing where it was being held up. And another example is the girl on the lefts top. I think that would have looked so much more amazing if it had have got given a few creases. The shading is beautifully done, but I'm afraid without the creases, it really does make it a little dull.
Everything else, I thought was lovely.
Vision: I'm going to give it 5 stars because the use of color is really effective and it makes the picture so great to look at!
Originality: I think it deserves 4 stars. I haven't seen many drawings that I haven't seen one like it before, and I have seen drawings similar to this, but most haven't been used the same way? Like you used the sisters thing, and I thought that was perfectly fitting!
Technique: I loved how you applied the color and the shading, so I'm going to give it 4 stars for those. Well done! It's not every day I see drawings shaded as well as this one is.
Impact: Definitely 5 star worthy. It really draws you in. I don't think it's really a picture you can not get a full view on. Wonderful job, latsy. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="
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latsy In reply to AnnieAnnieAnnie [2009-08-14 06:33:58 +0000 UTC]
Oh my gosh, thank you ;;
This is a really well thought out critique, thank you sooo much
Although I didn't draw it, I coloured it, and I want to thank you for writing such a wonderful critique. Thank you, so so much. <3
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AnnieAnnieAnnie In reply to latsy [2009-08-14 06:57:48 +0000 UTC]
Ohh I didn't realise you didn't draw it!
I probably should have checked. *laughs*
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dark-thorned-rose [2009-08-14 05:54:07 +0000 UTC]
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Since we are focusing on coloring her at the moment i will critique the coloring a.deviantart.net/avatars/f/u/f… " alt=" " title="furryglompplz"/> I absolutely love it..since it was a coloring contest i think you did really well on contrasting the colors and getting you point across. I love the different textures you used on the background as well. Very nice shading and very nice coloring. The one tiny thing i see wrong is a bit of the shading on the grayscale girl, it is just a slight bit off but then again maybe its my eyes.. very nice for digital coloring as well. Keep up the good work and try drawing something of your own and submitting it for a critique, i would like to see what you could do!!
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latsy In reply to dark-thorned-rose [2009-08-14 05:58:17 +0000 UTC]
Aww, thank you ;;
My first critique. Thank you, I'm honored that you'd take your time to do one. :'D
I will! I'm actually working on a pic right now. Thanks again! ;'D
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dark-thorned-rose In reply to latsy [2009-08-14 06:02:42 +0000 UTC]
Your welcome!!! i just got my sub and i decided to do some critiques!! and i can't wait to see your pic!!
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butterfree70 [2009-08-14 15:45:07 +0000 UTC]
oh wow! that rainbow one is like jasmine except she's shorter ahaha. this art is sososososo pretty!i like the texture in the background keep up the great work!
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latsy In reply to butterfree70 [2009-08-14 20:48:52 +0000 UTC]
LMAO ikr
or it's jasmine in her dreams since the rainbow girl is tall x]
thank you! <:
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Brushfire-Fairytales [2009-08-14 15:27:57 +0000 UTC]
I love love love the colours. I like how it matches both sides. And that hat is kick ass. I wish you luck in the contest.
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latsy In reply to Brushfire-Fairytales [2009-08-14 20:49:58 +0000 UTC]
oh my gosh, thanks you're so nice ;u;
yeah, I know. i want that hat!
thanks a bunch! <:
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Brushfire-Fairytales In reply to latsy [2009-08-14 21:56:53 +0000 UTC]
Your most welcome. <3
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shadow-Ball86 [2009-08-14 13:48:45 +0000 UTC]
LOL i'd go with the party sister, cause she has a cool hat!
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latsy In reply to shadow-Ball86 [2009-08-14 20:50:10 +0000 UTC]
LMAO
everyone loves her hat
including me ;D
thanks ahaha
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pralinkova-princezna [2009-08-14 08:25:58 +0000 UTC]
Very interesting, thanks for colouring!
Please, link to the contest journal too.
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latsy In reply to pralinkova-princezna [2009-08-14 20:50:47 +0000 UTC]
aww, you're welcome
oh shoot, i forgot! i put it in there now, sorry Dx i'm so stupid nowadays ahahah
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verygoodsir [2009-08-14 07:44:53 +0000 UTC]
i like the sisters concept haha
and the contrasting colour scheme is cool!
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latsy In reply to verygoodsir [2009-08-14 19:21:30 +0000 UTC]
ahaha really? thanks!
i like contrasting colour schemes too; i've always wanted to try one out in my pics but i never got some good lineart going
i'm glad i joined this contest to try that out! ahaha
thanks again! :'D
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Winoa [2009-08-14 06:37:42 +0000 UTC]
Is looks awesome. OwO
I love how you colored the hair, specially the highlights. :3
Good luck with the contest.
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latsy In reply to Winoa [2009-08-14 06:43:01 +0000 UTC]
Aww thank you <3
Really? Aahha, I used an oily blender this time, I'm glad it works well! ahaha
thank you ;u;
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Winoa In reply to latsy [2009-08-14 07:15:30 +0000 UTC]
Yup, it worked good. ^^
You're welcome. :3
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