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midnight-eyes [2009-09-15 05:39:30 +0000 UTC]

I love this, she's really pretty!
and the background is aweseome

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xxEmeraldPrincessxx [2009-09-15 02:22:05 +0000 UTC]

(Critique box thingy hates me lol)

(It's my first time writing a critique to you, so I hope you like it and don't get offended if I add constructive criticism or anything xD; but I really liked this picture and wanted to give you a proper comment)
This is really a lovely picture <3
I love how you're starting to draw realism, it's looking really nice!
I really like her face shape and angle here, I think it's a perfect size ^^ All of the features fit really nicely, and the proportioning and placement looks awesome c: plus I like how you linearted this in brown instead of black. It gives it a more realistic appearance and fits well with the skin tone ^^
I really like how you made the lips, the added shine really makes them stand out. If you made the bottom lip a little rounder with the lineart on the left side (from your perspective), though, it may have made them look a bit fuller ^^
Her eyes are really pretty too <3 I like the glassy effect, and how she's looking off to the side instead of at the viewer...I thought that was really unique Not to mention the color is really nice as well c: Though the shapes of the both of them are a little different, I noticed that the right one has a little more of an oval shape than the left, but overall, I think it's really well done ^^ I know how hard it can be to draw symmetrical eyes sometimes x3
The skin tones look really well, not too dark, and not too light c: which gives it a great realistic effect. If you had either a blur or a smudge tool like on GIMP though (I'm not familiar with the program you used so forgive me if there isn't a tool like that there ) you could probably make her complexion a bit smoother and even more lifelike. But it looks very nice as it is, you have a very good idea of where shadows and shading goes ^^ and it really shows on all of your artwork (:
You draw realistic noses so well too! I like how you drew it with a combination of skin tone shading and lineart, it looks really artistic and realistic ^^
The color scheme is really fitting, too. The metallic gold colors of her accessories and the silver eyes really fit well together, and the red lipstick goes perfectly. And the bright colors in the background make it noticeable without completely taking away from the picture. I think you did an excellent job here, your realistic artwork is wonderful and improving so much Your own personal style and technique really shine through on every deviation of yours. I hope you found this critique helpful, and I really look forward to seeing more of your work soon!

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xxEmeraldPrincessxx [2009-09-15 02:07:07 +0000 UTC]

This is really pretty ;w; I have a critique written out if you'd want it, but dA's not letting me post it even though it's like, 476 words long >.<
But this looks SO amazing, you're improving A LOT with realism!

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despaired-rainbow [2009-09-11 23:37:52 +0000 UTC]

TEACH ME HOW TO DRAW

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