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Published: 2017-03-05 00:42:13 +0000 UTC; Views: 6912; Favourites: 665; Downloads: 0
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This piece is simply excellent in all areas the only things i think need improving are the facial expression as something about it just seems a little of, maybe have her look at something and have her react to the thing she is looking at like if she was reading the book she could look interested in it, the thing in her hands which i think is meant to be a book its hard to tell so maybe you could work on drawing objects so its more clear as to what they are a way to do that is to get photos of real life objects and trace them so you can a feel for what they look like and finally the lighting on her right hand is off a little as the light on her middle finger is in the shape of a rectangle when it should be curved like the rest of the lighting because of the existence of knuckles other than that amazing.
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You're very much welcome.
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I love this so much!!
especially the background, the lighting and the color palette used.
if there's anything that could use a little fixing, I think you should detail her a bit more. like her hair or her face should have more detail so it contrasts from the rest of the image. I feel like if you make her shading as blocky as the background it would make her blend with it? she wouldn't be able to stand out as much.
also I feel that the way the hair is flowing should be justified by adding some other things flying in the same direction so there's the illusion of wind.
but other than that, this is a really attractive and well executed piece e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="
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You want so much to know what the girl is thinking! Well done!
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Incredible, love your take on the world of Oz. ^^
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The shadows are not very subtle ,the girl is bright .The combination is striking and beautiful.
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thank you so much!
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Dorothy is wandering through a strange land.
I like.
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Thank you so much :3 you so often comments my art ,thank you *_* it's so impotant for me ♡♡♡♡
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Beautiful! I'm not really the right person to give critique to art, but I guess I'll try. I feel like the only issue is the eyes. They seem empty, like they're of a lifeless being staring off into nothing. My only advice is to add a tiny bit more detail to the eyes, but other than that, this is perfect
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thank you for feedback !^_^
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