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Published: 2010-05-05 04:16:33 +0000 UTC; Views: 1059; Favourites: 26; Downloads: 39
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Description So ~SEGAallSTAR asked me to help make her a character, so I did. <3
She's new to dA, make her feel welcome~. <3
Ironically I made her fur colors almost the same as Lav's by accident. XD
I didn't really realize it till now lmao. Oh well.

Hope you like it, I personally like her myself she's adorable. <3
I tried to keep her somewhat simple, but it's hard for me to do that when it comes to like a Gothic like character. XD
I made her cyber Goth hu-yaah! Love Cyber Goths or cyber punks or whatever. I just love the bright colors lol. I'd so totally see myself as a cyber punk man! That'd be awesome, but too lazy. XD

Also I'm aware I'm behind on the character designs and stuff, I was helping her first cause she has no character to draw really.. and I felt bad, I'll get to the next ones soon. <3
Gotta look at old notes to find em and get on track again, man am I behind on everything! XD

Anyways, I hope you like her dear!

Art & design © =shadkitty
Character ( name depending on new owner ) © ~SEGAallSTAR
Do not take without permission, only ~SEGAallSTAR can take this without permission, and do whatever they wish with it, do not take this without asking, no recoloring, claiming as your own, etc. You may use this as an icon, ID, wallpaper or whatnot, just let me and ~SEGAallSTAR know so you won't have an issue of being accused of art theft. Respect the artist, and the owner of the character.
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Comments: 22

amakiirdragon [2010-05-05 21:58:56 +0000 UTC]

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I have to say that this is awesome! I love the boots and gloves the most with the skull and teeth. She has a cute pose as well. I also like the colors but you are right that they resemble Lavender's colors a little too much, which is slightly bugging me ('cuz I'm like OCD).

The only real problem I have is that I think you need to shake up the colors just a tad and you're proportions are throwing me off. Her body is short, bottom legs are quite long, hands are a bit too big and her upper arms are tiny sticks. But you don't have to change it, some prefer uneven proportions. Though if you do wish to work on the proportions try this site [link] it helped me a lot!

Other than that she looks wicked cool! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/h/h… " width="15" height="13" alt="" title="Heart"/> Boots! I want those boots! (I hope this was helpful, it's my first critique so sorry if it's not e.deviantart.net/emoticons/a/a… " width="19" height="19" alt="" title="Sweating a little..."/>)

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Lavenkitty In reply to amakiirdragon [2010-05-06 01:02:30 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. <3
Yeah I did a side by side check and they were only 10 shades from each other, which is odd how I didn't notice it till I posted it LOL. Oh well. XD

The colors I had were quite limited, blue, black and silver, so I had to basically chose from there, I had urges to add a color but this was for someone and I wanted to at least have the eyes at most not the same. The short body is an error, I need to fix that, I'm used to Sonic still, the arms are meant to be stick like and rather wonky like hands lol. But the body is meant to be somewhat human but a little bit more cartoony and you know not too wide, but the length is something I need to work on.

Thanks. <3
Lol the boots I loved too. XD
It was you made me realize and with the help of others telling me too that I need to make the body longer, so now I'm pretty sure of what I have to work on. |D

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amakiirdragon In reply to Lavenkitty [2010-05-06 01:12:08 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome ^^

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NightmarePantheramon [2010-05-05 04:48:23 +0000 UTC]

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While I'm in AWE at how simple yet effective this concept is, I'm only going to critique character design, as I feel thats what is most needed.

Now, the colour scheme - I really like the colour scheme you got going here. All the colours are really smooth and easy on the eyes, yet interesting and unique. I find no flaws in the colour scheme.

Character design overall -- simple, clean and while I'd love to say its unique I see one major flaw in the hair -particularly the bangs-, for the first thing that came to mind was Lavander. They're very, very similar, even if not exactly alike.

Cliches I also spot are her fingerless gloves and knee high boots; both of which are very overdone, especially on females. You may want to change the boots to ankle boots, or maybe even sneakers? The character seems to be very singer/dancer based; sneakers or ankleboots would fit the design a bit more as it would allow greater flexability.

Also as cool as metal boots may seem, it'd make the character ridiculously slow and limited in movement. I'd say change the material to something like leather. Look up fabrics, theres dozens.

Overall, I give the characters design a 3 1/2 out of 5 stars <3 its cute, simple and the flaws are little to none, so its pretty good. <3

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Lavenkitty In reply to NightmarePantheramon [2010-05-06 00:48:36 +0000 UTC]

Yes the colors where to be blue silver and black so I made variations of the three. Different shades that I thought would look complimenting to each other.

Yeah the side bangs are the only ones that way but shorter and rather more animeish ( just a clump of bangs on her head really ), the other bang is actually like a hang over hair effect, like Kim Possible but a side bang like effect and the other one is supposed to be the same but it was put into a ponytail and the other part of her hair is rather loose-ish. Lav just have bangs but due to being used to drawing her it looks similar because I really couldn't make it any higher without it looking.. weird. But I could have made it shorter. But that main thing the same is the colors, I oddly made them almost the same ( I tested it and they were only a tad off seriously how the eff did I do that without noticing?! XD )

I made the finger less glove somewhat unique in a way I made some end in a sharper like way and had different lengths too. In fact the cuffs part are part of her gloves though I didn't really explain it, I suppose I gotta explain it more lol. But in general, I need to cut that fingerless glove habit off lol.
And yeah knee top boots are overdone indeed. |D
She's meant to be a gothic vocaloid like singer ( as requested ). So I basically tried not to over do the detail otherwise this would be completely crazy of a design but would be hard to replicate cause it would have so much detail dear me.

The thing is they're not metal at all.. they're actually regular rubber thingy you know I just didn't name it that ( it was 1:00 AM in the morning so a few things I did miss and I'll recheck it sometime lol )

Thanks for the crit, <3 I gotta cut the knee boots off and the fingerless gloves habit off lol.

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K-E-Y-K-O [2010-05-16 13:15:37 +0000 UTC]

wow
impressive work^^

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Lavenkitty In reply to K-E-Y-K-O [2010-05-27 02:11:03 +0000 UTC]

Thanks dear <333

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K-E-Y-K-O In reply to Lavenkitty [2010-05-27 12:23:50 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome miss

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Martyna-Chan [2010-05-06 08:49:12 +0000 UTC]

Awesome

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Lavenkitty In reply to Martyna-Chan [2010-05-08 23:05:47 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. <333

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Martyna-Chan In reply to Lavenkitty [2010-05-09 06:43:23 +0000 UTC]

Welcome hun

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SonicAmyShadow [2010-05-05 20:17:39 +0000 UTC]

Awww she looks amaizing. I love the design u made her plus the colors look nice on her design.

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Lavenkitty In reply to SonicAmyShadow [2010-05-06 01:40:02 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. <333

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SonicAmyShadow In reply to Lavenkitty [2010-05-06 01:49:47 +0000 UTC]

No prob!!!

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Fvcked-Nihilist [2010-05-05 18:21:29 +0000 UTC]

her armor actually .... looks like its from dead space XD !!!
im jokng GREAT WORK!!!!

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Lavenkitty In reply to Fvcked-Nihilist [2010-05-06 01:38:14 +0000 UTC]

Well it's not armor although it looks like armor lol. XD
But yeah kinda I think it's the skulls and the outfit somewhat lmao.
Thanks. <3

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SEGAallSTAR [2010-05-05 12:44:37 +0000 UTC]

OH WOW! <3 this.......this is just AMAZING!!!! <3333 She looks perfect! I love her so much!!! Her outfit is adorable and I love her hair SO CREATIVE I JUST LOVE IT!!!!! <33333 I love her so much! Im gonna take good care of her and keep her forever! Thanks so much Kitty! <3333 You really helped me out here!!! I love ita whole bunch!

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Lavenkitty In reply to SEGAallSTAR [2010-05-06 01:36:38 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad you like her. <33
I had fun with her hair, one side pony tail and once side like hair like Kim Possible, if you know what cartoon character I'm talking about, I liked that hair style lol. XD So I made a side by side hair style, it's so fun to drawwww. <3
No probby dear, if you want you can change anything if you want. <3 Color or detail wise. <3

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SEGAallSTAR In reply to Lavenkitty [2010-05-06 12:05:04 +0000 UTC]

I LOVE KIM POSSIBLE!!!!! She's awesome! I still watch her shows |D lol. I love her designs!! You did lovely on her! <3 She's so awesome Im already drawing pictures of her so far

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Argos90 [2010-05-05 12:31:17 +0000 UTC]

That is very Nice, and her outfit is Just Great , but i see a problem with her chest, looks a bit misaligned, i guess hehe

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Lavenkitty In reply to Argos90 [2010-05-06 01:34:13 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. <3
Yeah I'm not too good on drawing chests haa.. XD

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Argos90 In reply to Lavenkitty [2010-05-06 22:38:27 +0000 UTC]

hehe no problem, that is something that can be arranged

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