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Published: 2007-11-27 09:12:15 +0000 UTC; Views: 153; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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Description This boy was fairly normal for the age of 6 and did the things most young boys would do for their free time. He would collect bugs and rocks and play in sand and dirt, specially sand, digging tunnels and little waterways and filling them with water and making it like a poorly child made sort of sand city, but in the boys mind it was nothing but the best in architecture! A grand city it was to the boy, and he was it's ruler, maker and god. Until it came time for lunch then he would turn off the hose that fed the water into his little city and the water left would be quickly consumed by the dry sands. But little did he know that his imagination could do so much more than make him a great ruler of a city of his own, and it did do so much more, it set the boy on a grand journy that when completed his time spent playing in the sand would be the times he would spend ruling that very kingdom he would build.
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Comments: 8

Sancosity [2010-07-31 19:40:44 +0000 UTC]

;o;
This is so awesome!! <3
jasldjaskdja wow, submitted in 2007 >w< I guess I'm a bit late to be commenting on it ;w;
Oh well, it's still lovely <3
You should carry it on, even if it was like a million years ago -w- <3

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lazy-fox In reply to Sancosity [2010-09-02 02:31:28 +0000 UTC]

Oh wow. LOL Thanks! <3

This was so long ago.. I definitely see some things that need to be fixed in even that short bit. I always get urges to write stories, as I'm sure most people do from time to time. But never act on it I guess.

Thanks again though. <3

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C-Squirrel [2007-12-01 03:16:31 +0000 UTC]

Well I certainly like it! 8D I think you did an amazing job with this-- you set the scene off perfectly and introduced the character very well so far! I definitely think you should continue with this. You've always been such a good writer, even with simple things like essays. I really love the wide variety of vocabulary you've used; words like "architecture" and "consumed" really enhances your writing. Great work!

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lazy-fox In reply to C-Squirrel [2007-12-01 11:57:23 +0000 UTC]

I don't like it. xD Never do like anything I write. o_o Guess I can't delete this though. T_T

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C-Squirrel In reply to lazy-fox [2007-12-02 00:26:49 +0000 UTC]

I'm like that with my art. xD Always hate it.

And there's a way you can delete it, but I'm not telling you how cause it's awesome and you need to leave it up. 8D

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lazy-fox In reply to C-Squirrel [2007-12-03 09:04:20 +0000 UTC]

Rawr. Your art is awesome!

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C-Squirrel In reply to lazy-fox [2007-12-04 00:49:10 +0000 UTC]

Not nearly as awesome as them writing skillz of yerrrz. X3

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lazy-fox In reply to C-Squirrel [2007-12-06 03:29:59 +0000 UTC]

I will get the men in white jackets to take you away. D<

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