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lazynerd — pokemon mystery dungeon ch15-2
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Description CHAPTER 15: THE TOWER PART 2_______

We saw a huge maze at the start of the stairs. We walked inside and found every corner with a strong pokemon. There were so many paths and dead ends that it didn’t take long to find out that we were all separated! I realized it when I turned around and there was Kinichi right there. Behind her, however, was an enemy pokemon. After defeating him, we continued with our maze. I was worried about Ken. I knew that he was strong enough to be able to defend himself in this maze, but I couldn’t shake that worried feeling. I then had an idea. Why don’t I dig holes in the walls so that we can go through the walls to the next set of stairs. I told Kinichi to stand back. I jumped in the air and found where the stairs were. I focused my energy into my beak and began to spin. I charged right at the wall where Kinichi was and bust through the first wall. I lost all of the energy in the first wall and crashed in the second wall. Kinichi helped me up and she then tried metal claw, which worked just as well. I shot bubblebeam in the air hoping that Ken and Chimchar would see and try to find their way to us. The only problem with busting down the walls was now the enemy pokemon were now drawn to where we were and we now had o face more pokemon at a time than usual. We eventually made our way to the end of the maze. I shot another bubblebeam to try to attract attention from Ken and Chimchar. Kinichi and I waited in front of the stairs and from the corner of my eye saw a figure from behind a pillar next to the stairs.
“Kinichi,” I whispered under my breath. “fire a flamethrower at the right pillar next to the stairs.” When she did, the figure jumped out to dodge and appeared before us was an alakazam.
“You are a smart pair.” Complimented us he did.
“Let me guess, we must go through you to proceed.” I said
“That’s correct. I’m gonna take care of you two before the other two show up so I don’t have to fight four at the same time. My chances of victory have now increased to 100%. You can’t win.”
“Let’s see you beat us.” I said. Kinichi shot flamethrower and I shot bubblebeam simultaneously and he dodged both of them. I put his spoons together and fired psybeam at me, which hit. Kinichi came up with metal claw as I got up. I readied arial ace and when he dodged kinichi’s attack, I hit him with mine. I followed up with drill peck right in his stomach. When he was pinned, Kinichi fired hyper beam and when he saw it coming, he used reflect and directed the attack to me. I was really weak after that attack. I shot bubblebeam and he used confusion to redirect it at Kinichi. Kinichi was blown backwards to the ground. I used arial ace and barely knocked out one of his spoons. This did some major damage for some reason. I remembered that alakazam always carry two spoons. Maybe if we knock them both away from him, we can beat him easily. I fired bubblebeam and when he directed it at Kinichi I instructed her to use flamethrower and not to back down. When she did, the bubblebeam and flamethrower together exploded and sent smoke everywhere. I readied another arial ace as I was looking for Alakazam. I found him hiding behind a pillar. Before he could try to notice me, I came in and hit him with arial ace. I grabbed the spoon in his hand and knocked him to the wall with bubblebeam. He know had no spoons, so he was completely powerless. I cornered him in the wall and before I could finish him off, he started to beg for mercy. I, being of kind heart, decided to just knock him out. Ken and Chimchar showed up as the smoke was clearing. They were shocked to see the alackazam on the floor unconscious.
“Wow.” Said Chimchar. “What happened here? Another guard?”
“Yeah, but we took care of it.” I said like it wasn’t a big deal. We decided to rest up a bit before we climbed the stairs to the next floor. We were getting closer to the final part of our adventure. We were about to save the entire world.
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sansoris [2008-08-16 05:46:45 +0000 UTC]

“You are a smart pair.” Complimented us he did.

...sorry, that made me laugh XD

I'm a horrible, horrible person

ANYWAY, there are instances you can use a Shakespearean dialect, and there are times it just sounds odd. This is one of those awkward moments it just sounds bad

Oh, and try to arrange sentences so they all don't start with "I". Repetitive, it is.

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lazynerd In reply to sansoris [2008-08-16 05:56:53 +0000 UTC]

thnx for the advice!

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