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leafstorm99 ā Jet The Hawk
Published: 2010-05-03 14:38:24 +0000 UTC; Views: 2680; Favourites: 50; Downloads: 868
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Description
I found this lineart of Jet and tried out a new colouirng style.
What did i use? Lineart
GIMP
How long did it take? 15-20 Minutes.
Comments & Favs are appreciated guys! Tell me what you think of this style~x
(c) Lineart =FizTheAncient
(c) Colouring *leafstorm99
(c) Jet The Hawk ~SEGA
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Comments: 46
Okay, my turn.
I am not going to critique the lineart. It doesn't belong to you anyway. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/sā¦ " width="15" height="15" alt="
You got his color just right. Can't complain.
But there are 2 of things that are quite off on this picture:
-Shading
-Messy color filling
Shading could be done a lot more better. His muzzle/ beak looks like he has dimples.
Also, it's really hard to find a light source in this picture.
For airbrushing, make sure you use magic wand on the coloring layer. Or else the colors will scatter all over the place.
If you don't want to use magic wand, you can at least erase the messy parts carefully.
Hope my critique helped. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/sā¦ " width="15" height="15" alt="
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Excellent view of Jet! Very clever as well! I can't draw Sonic birds that well, so this is hard for me to give critique. I loved the eyes and the expression, as well as the colors.
My only complaint would be the lines. In some places, they are light grey and at the top, completely transparent! Being one who spends over an hour adding lines to my pictures AFTER coloring them, I look very hard at the lineart. Although, my lines are never that smoothe.
Overall, this is a good picture that captures Jet perfectly. Good job and keep up the good work!
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Catchy critique.
But I don't really agree with the originality section.
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Okay. Very well. We both have our opionions.
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yeaah when i was shading it the lines went slightly transparent from the white 
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No problem!
A quick tip would be, if you are using photoshop, to use the polygon tool to help fix lines when you are coloring lineart.
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aah i cant afford photoshop so i have to make do with gimp right now 
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Yeah! Thanks!
Anyway, who made your icon?
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your welcome!
oh and made it
I held an icon contest and she won it <3
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Cool! I wish I had a better icon for myself. One that actually blinked. LOL!
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Lol! But yours is really cool though still
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Lol. Indeed. Indeed.
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you made him look so cute! i just love the way he is!
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that looks really good! i like how you did the eyes lol they look all realistic
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thanks, the colouring made them look shiny <3
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um....
wats with his face?
and wats he looken at???
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Heh... either he's yawning or belching...?
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the coloring was done well although is there a reason for the pose
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i just coloured it
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your welcome
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This is great work you've done, the eyes look nice and shiny and you did a good job keeping the colours inside the lines, overall this is a job well done
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thanks! i really liked colourin it! <3
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Your welcome Leaf, and cool
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Wow, this is really great. ^.^
I think that this style could work for you.
Because the colors are very bold and that seems appropriate for you.
I also love the background that you did, Open sky!! :3
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thanks! <33 i really like this style, its quick, simple and fun!And i think it looks really cool! 
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^^ You are very welcome!!! <3
I am glad you had fun!!
Aww, randomness is great for the artist. >w<
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