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Published: 2008-06-04 04:11:19 +0000 UTC; Views: 277; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 0
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Description Salty sweet, your lips tempt me
And I can never resist
Your eyes call out to me
Come hither
Come to me
I can feel you, pressed on me
Soft, smooth, supple
Perfect...
Your skin
Slowly, rippling,
Gooebumps.
Tumbling downwards
Your weight upon myself
A tangle of blankets
And flesh.
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Comments: 10

alexajaye [2008-06-04 23:53:28 +0000 UTC]

Nice visual. Very nice visual.

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Leesie2k5 In reply to alexajaye [2008-06-05 00:28:54 +0000 UTC]

thanks so much

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tatteredangel [2008-06-04 15:04:08 +0000 UTC]

I like it. Especially the ending

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Leesie2k5 In reply to tatteredangel [2008-06-04 15:18:03 +0000 UTC]

thanks so much
i really appreciate your opinions on my work, since i know you enjoy reading and producing this kind of stuff as much as i do.
thanks again, darlin.
are you feeling better, btw?

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tatteredangel In reply to Leesie2k5 [2008-06-04 20:09:57 +0000 UTC]

Well I wish I could write poetry as vividly as you do. Often my ideas end up staying stuck in my head because I want to make the description pretty and then it never turns out that way :/

I'm good. Aside from my uterus getting ready to...well you know!

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Leesie2k5 In reply to tatteredangel [2008-06-04 20:46:15 +0000 UTC]

yeah, i know what you mean. when i had my IUD put in, i was on the cotton donkey for three weeks straight. i'm still spotting a bit.

and thank you. i don't really know how i do it. i just... write. it kinda all feels like nonselse pouring out, but when i reread/edit it, it seems to make sense all of a sudden. it's the strangest thing.

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fargokraft [2008-06-04 06:45:01 +0000 UTC]

just to let you know,
I'm EXTREMELY picky with reading material. X3

so- being that your poem kept my attention, that's pretty hard to do

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Leesie2k5 In reply to fargokraft [2008-06-04 15:18:28 +0000 UTC]

wow, thanks. that really means a lot to me.
i'm happy you liked it

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jadedlady [2008-06-04 04:28:50 +0000 UTC]

Very nice!

(Fix your "goosebumps")

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Leesie2k5 In reply to jadedlady [2008-06-04 04:33:04 +0000 UTC]

haha thanks

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