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Published: 2007-11-29 06:51:17 +0000 UTC; Views: 252; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 2
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Description I feel it ripple, quickly
Shivering down my spine
Culminating in a blissful shudder
Your smile pierces me
Your eyes light me on fire
From the inside...
A different kind of fire
A deeper kind of burn
A new form of pleasure
With a small spike of pain
Sweet, sweet torture
My eyes roll back
Control is hard to maintain
And you haven't even touched me yet.
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Comments: 9

Leichenengel [2013-07-02 13:03:04 +0000 UTC]

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Dukluss [2008-02-02 07:25:36 +0000 UTC]

The last line made me laugh.

Very...stimulating. I like it.

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eaerth [2008-02-01 20:18:54 +0000 UTC]

it's amazing how love can inspire such vivid writing. whether it's happy or sad, it's usually the most intense and provocative work.

i really dig your style!

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Leesie2k5 In reply to eaerth [2008-02-01 21:08:23 +0000 UTC]

thank you. its so true, love makes for beautiful poetry. so does lust... my favorite sin

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eaerth In reply to Leesie2k5 [2008-02-01 22:41:02 +0000 UTC]

right, right!

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tatteredangel [2008-01-28 22:05:57 +0000 UTC]

I like the way it twists at the end and the description is really effective.

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Leesie2k5 In reply to tatteredangel [2008-01-28 22:08:33 +0000 UTC]

what can i say.. sexy men make me horny <3

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Leesie2k5 [2007-11-29 06:54:22 +0000 UTC]

thank you very much ^_^ im glad you like it.

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verkunder [2007-11-29 06:53:23 +0000 UTC]

Someone needs a towel. Fantastic job of being descriptive.

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