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Leesie2k5 — In my Mind
Published: 2008-01-26 17:39:50 +0000 UTC; Views: 169; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 2
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Description Black and blue flames
Lick at my back and neck
As I sit alone in the dark
Torrent with desire
And overcome with passion
A distand growl echoes
From somewhere down the cavern
Of my own personal hell
A blood curdling scream
Escapes my mouth
As deep gashes in my back
Open and begin to bleed
As the blood drips down
Leathery black wings burst forth
From my bloodied shoulders
In searing pain I fall
The cold, hard floor
Comes up to meet me
Hot tears streak my face
As I struggle to stand
Trapped within my head
My wings powerfully open
And I burst through these dark walls
Within my dementia
And I am free
Then my halo slips
And falls
And shatters...
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Comments: 3

eaerth [2008-02-01 20:26:32 +0000 UTC]

very powerful combination of words... nicely done, i like this a lot.

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Leesie2k5 In reply to eaerth [2008-02-01 21:10:00 +0000 UTC]

i wrote this one in high school when i was suffering from severe depression.
even from misery can there be beauty.

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eaerth In reply to Leesie2k5 [2008-02-01 22:42:53 +0000 UTC]

true story. i don't think i'm ever inspired to write unless i'm severely depressed or in love...

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