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Published: 2008-01-28 07:28:31 +0000 UTC; Views: 171; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 0
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Shape meContort me
Make me yours
Bend me
Break me
Make me scream
Take me
Fill me
Make me beg
Push me
Pull me
Make me fly
Hold me
Kiss me
Make me yours.
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Comments: 4
tatteredangel [2008-01-28 22:10:46 +0000 UTC]
Love this one. Don't know if you noticed you did this but with the three words instead of two on some of the lines - they fit well together as the poem runs.
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Leesie2k5 In reply to tatteredangel [2008-01-28 22:16:24 +0000 UTC]
its action action, make me, action action, make me
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Leesie2k5 In reply to tatteredangel [2008-01-28 22:19:56 +0000 UTC]
yeah, i actually didnt mean for it to turn out that way... but after the first few stanzas, i noticed a pattern, so i kept it goin' because it looked nice ^_^;
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