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Will-Graham [2010-08-03 00:52:09 +0000 UTC]

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bree bree i think this is very nice for an athro xD better then me. but you need to work on somethings . maybe on the shirt....it might need some rincales (spelling fail). it looks completely flat :S maybe on the back, the butt, and the arm? also maybe the foot.also maybe make an opening near the arm (she looks kinda fat that way) it needs a toe. it just looks like a stup that way. and the taill looks like its just big all the way. maybe make it smaller from the shirt and make it larger that way? also a bit longer (in my opinion) the last thing i would change would be make the neck alittle smaller. then make the shoulders.
well i hope this helped! <3 (im not god at critiques soo)

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Dragons-Ace [2010-07-28 08:01:15 +0000 UTC]

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Hmmm... Let's see. This is a good start at anthro I think. Obviously you still need to work on this a little bit. Namely the anatomy. There is plenty of tutorials out there for help on that, and it's also always good to take a look at references. Because, while anthro is... well, anthro, it's still good to look at human anatomy and alter it a tiny bit with whatever animal your anthro is.

I really like how you've done the face. It looks pretty good to me, especially considering that you did go with a canine muzzle. =3

As for the rest of the picture. While it is simple, it's still nice to look at.

Hope this helped you a little bit.

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Abstract-Mindser [2010-08-03 01:08:58 +0000 UTC]

I suggest submitting your item to that, as to receive mass critique and comments.

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ANGELOFDEATHnDESPAIR [2010-07-28 23:57:06 +0000 UTC]

is great,just need to work on u lines bit k

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the-hivesfan31 [2010-07-28 16:48:29 +0000 UTC]

for a first anthro it looks good

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PoppyPaws [2010-07-28 08:07:24 +0000 UTC]

It looks very good for your first anthro attempt.

Though, as a bit of a crit commet; shall I suggest looking through different anthro/or human anatomy? It looks very nice; but I honestly think you have the potential to do much, much better with a little help from anatomy.

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