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Angrygaming [2018-05-02 15:28:36 +0000 UTC]

As a good friend, and fan of your pieces, I think your work can include some good criticism. It looks like the colors are a bit inspired off the Pepsi logo being it's red, blue, and gathering much lighter colors such as white or grey. With this said these colors give the model a very pleasing look as it sits in the white back ground. It looks like you've got the shape and stuff down for the base of the model such as ladder, wheels, and more. It mostly looks like you are aiming for your model to stay some-what low poly and have more like a box-like figure. This does also make the model appealing to look at; however, it would look a bit better if it was smoothed a bit more, friend. The front of the truck, where the front bumper is, looks like it would look better a bit straighter. Being that it is a truck, the front bumper can stay with a squarish look but the edges should be a tad bit rounder and not have those sharp edges (save those sharp edges for if you want to do something like swords and other weapons).  The same goes for the wheels. It looks as though the wheels are blades than having the round friction is needs to consider itself a wheel. Watch for the stand part at the top of the truck in the back. The poles and the stand itself could use a cleaner look as well. Practice and mess around with the smooth settings. Especially get the feel for the beveling. The better it looks as a 'shade flat' model you wont have to consider using  'shade smooth'. Make the wheels a little wider as well. I love your work and keep it up. I would like to see more!

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