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I was thinking this portrait of would look better if I cropped it like this. My signature is gone but I like it more I think. What do you think? Should I delete the original post?Related content
Comments: 13
Marie-Esther [2014-01-06 23:59:02 +0000 UTC]
I find it very beautiful!
I like this cropped version more, because the eyes and lips stand out better (as PMucks said, it may be slightly better if you included the cropped knuckle, but we're talking about subtle details)
The likeness is absolutely well done and I love your soft and subtle shading.
The only thing I would personally do is enhancing the contrasts a little bit. Expecially on her hair (and in the previous version. From the original picture you can see her hair is slightly darker on the upper part of her head and it gets lighter moving downhill)
But Jon, I think it's a gorgeous drawing, as gorgeous is the model!
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Legrandzilla In reply to DeLumine [2014-01-04 15:23:28 +0000 UTC]
Oh thank you! A real compliment coming from you!
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COLOREDINLOVE [2013-12-20 03:28:21 +0000 UTC]
I love them both! You do much better than you think! She is lovely...either way hon!
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PMucks [2013-12-19 18:47:08 +0000 UTC]
I like this one better. It seems to have more impact. The only thing that bugs me is her knuckle being cut off. Either way it's a very good drawing. Why not just leave both versions up?
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Legrandzilla In reply to PMucks [2013-12-19 18:48:34 +0000 UTC]
Maybe I will, thanks. I just felt like something must be wrong with the other one...
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