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Lei-sam — chap1_8
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Published: 2006-05-08 05:55:00 +0000 UTC; Views: 7995; Favourites: 43; Downloads: 338
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Yeah!!!!, this is the last page of the first chapter (and boy did it took me a long time!!!
sorry!!!)This page is specially dedicated to my dear friend , thank you dear for all your help!!!!!
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Versión en español!: [link]
This chapter is also dedicated to my DA friends (thank you guys! I really appreciate all your support!!
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Comments: 17
Two favorite panels here:
The top middle one, where you pictured quite emphatically that Iruka is caught between the need to address an enemy threat and the need to aid his comrade.
Then there's the one right after, with the dark haired teammate taking the unconscious one to safety. Their positions and perspective was done very well. It seems like it would have been difficult to draw right.
Of course, I also love the expression on the main enemy's face in the bottom right panel. And Iruka in the top right.
Huh...I guess I just really like this page.
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my, I don't know what to say, I really appreciate your comments!!
it is really refreshing reading detailed comments on what you think of the pages, it really makes me go back and pay attention to the details!
thanks again for your comments! I've really enjoyed reading them!
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Your hugely good at drawing people. Specially Iruka. I tried to once, but I didn't have the patience to draw out a story. So you deserve credit for that.
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kyaaaaaaaaaa me vas a matar lei-sam X-x!!!!, esta super interesante >3👍: 0 ⏩: 0
Me encanta esta parte del doj >_< me encanta Iruka en modo de combate.
Argh!! más, más. ^___^
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Jooo ^__^ Gracias. Al menos yo, no merezco tus atenciones T__T .... Damnit. Tngo q dedicarte algo, no puede ser que seas tan maja! 
...Quero máaas, maaas doujinshi ^___^ Me encantan los dos primeros paneles de esta página *__*
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gracias
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c(')(') pure love
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Oooh, what a cliffhanger... I really can't wait to see the next page...
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I think it turned out ok ^ ^ The double "hai", like MayVeggieGirl1 mentioned, isn't too weird . . . alittle at first but it's alright ^--^ Great job! I love how this is turning out, really! +FAV! (just like every other page) XD
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YAY! I am glad to support you! Congrats on the end of chapter one!
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gracias ¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡ 
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Dialogs a little broken there in between pannels, which normally is fine but it seems more awkward because he says Hai twice then. Still doing great so far! 
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waah! that close-up on Iruka made me drool!
Caray! Todo esta bien chilo! Estoy bien celosa de tu modo de debujar! Pero, lo amo aun que sea! 
As always, I'm totally loving all this! Beautiful lineart and so much detail!
Keep up the great work!
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