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Published: 2005-08-22 02:57:04 +0000 UTC; Views: 818; Favourites: 18; Downloads: 175
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This has a monotone feel that I'm really diggin'.
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不错啊! 这两张画没有了那两行字好看多了
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Thanks everyone! 
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wooo is that the lotus flower ?? i think it needs some further contrasts, coz right now its looking a little flat, perhaps highlight the flower a little in a soft pink? but yeah general composition is good
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In the 2nd one it should definitaley be "Leave me alone, let me take a breath..." i'm not sure what you are trying to say in the first one, but I think it's "I still need you, even though you've left.." or i still depend on you, even though you're gone..." ?
Anyways, I agree, very nice, unsaturated colours...hao ji la! 
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Very contrasty and crisp leo , and the words do give it more depth. I'd have probably passed this by, but you have made good use of it.
"I need you , though you have allready left."
"Leave me alone , let me get my breath"
thats how i read it anyway , wich kind of even ryhmes
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yeah i agree with the previous comment on the wording. I can see what your trying to say, but maybe you should re-phrase it or get someone to help you write it in a way thats easier to read and understand
other than that,
its a fantastic work and the photos look beautiful
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Thanks!And my english is poor...would you guys please help me
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yeah sure
On the left where it says
"I need depend on, though you have already leave..."
you could have instead either
"I need you, but you've already left"
-OR-
"I depend on you, but you've left me"
The one on the right that says
"leave me alone, let me take some breath"
you could possibly have...
"leave me alone, let me breathe"
At the bottom where you have "Excessiveness" it doesnt really fit in with your 2 other bits of writting. Excessiveness means where there is a lot of something, usually meaning its too much.
Just a few ideas for you Leo
Excellent photographs
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How elegant! When I take pictures of lotus, I'm always hesitant about downplaying the beautiful colors, but you really did it to a great effect here. Very serene and classy. +fav
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oh btw, I sort of look at the picture without reading the words. I think the pictures do add to the meaning of the words, but the words don't really do the same to the pictures.
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