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Published: 2004-05-25 22:44:20 +0000 UTC; Views: 348; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 37
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Description                                                    Speeding stars chase silver moons,

like kids in cars and ambulance doors.

                    Fatal scars from crashing cars,

                                            smear mascara like dust from stars.

                                                                 Bruised backseats envy the skies,


because falling stars have never felt the pain of crashing.
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Comments: 20

dreams-and-lies [2004-06-17 06:31:02 +0000 UTC]

Woooww. Shame on me for not checking your stuff out lately. And shame on you for not liking it. I think it's brilliant.

I <3 it too much I think. Every last line of it. Congratulations on blowing my mind one more time.

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Darrenx [2004-06-07 05:36:02 +0000 UTC]

short sweet and totally fucking awesome

-burns columbia acceptance letter-

no amount of studying writing could ever catch me up to you

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lesseroflindsey In reply to Darrenx [2004-06-08 18:56:26 +0000 UTC]

you got accepted to Columbia? how awesome is that.

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my-soul [2004-06-02 23:59:09 +0000 UTC]

thats wonderful. there were a lot of "cars/stars" but thats ok. it helped get the message across ^.^ great job

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lesseroflindsey In reply to my-soul [2004-06-06 20:38:05 +0000 UTC]

thank you for both of your comments. It is so nice to have people like you on d.a.

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MajesticRaro [2004-06-02 20:18:33 +0000 UTC]

Great poem, and it was written in one of my favorite styles!!

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lesseroflindsey In reply to MajesticRaro [2004-06-02 20:57:14 +0000 UTC]

you are so nice.

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averyage8 [2004-05-31 04:34:30 +0000 UTC]

because falling stars have never felt the pain of crashing.

lindsey, oh how you amaze me. i'm looking forward to seeing more of "the stars" series.

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SoundsOfSorrow [2004-05-28 20:46:24 +0000 UTC]

nice , short, sweet, and meaningful

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emptyechoes [2004-05-27 18:26:08 +0000 UTC]

I love the last line. Gorgeous, the formatting is interesting as well.

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FalseReflection [2004-05-27 02:01:06 +0000 UTC]

because falling stars have never felt the pain of crashing.

Your ending to this was the most amazing thing I've probably read from you... well... maybe because I just read it...hell...all of your work is amazing. But anyway, you have a wonderful way with words...this poem is awesome, it's all so true. Speaking of stars, you deserve a + star for outstanding work

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lesseroflindsey In reply to FalseReflection [2004-05-27 12:52:44 +0000 UTC]

wow. Thanks Megan. I didn't deserve that kid, but it means a lot!

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bloodydayze [2004-05-26 22:39:27 +0000 UTC]

i really like this one ya know totally makes sence nice job...

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xxxfearofperfectionx [2004-05-26 06:51:11 +0000 UTC]

Bruised backseats envy the skies,


i love it your so wonderful

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brecey [2004-05-26 03:08:38 +0000 UTC]

oo lindsey... you're so awesome

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LeftCoastEnvy [2004-05-26 00:30:49 +0000 UTC]

i hate that you make me do this so much. i really do. but i can never, ever think of anything to say that comes close to expressing how much i love your writing.

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waffleofhate [2004-05-25 23:42:32 +0000 UTC]

"smear mascara like dust from stars"

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RainDownMyBlues [2004-05-25 23:40:54 +0000 UTC]

FInally! I like it . I do like the first a little better but this is up there with it. Good job...but when do you submit something that isnt'?

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BrightEyes0702 [2004-05-25 22:48:55 +0000 UTC]

deep. i love ths second to last line

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lesseroflindsey In reply to BrightEyes0702 [2004-05-26 04:59:20 +0000 UTC]

thank you friend.

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