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Published: 2012-07-22 00:50:56 +0000 UTC; Views: 46; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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Never speaking the truthNever quite a lie
Head so full of folly
Why should I even try?
Some men always falling
Some men need to fly
My body grows so tired
Why do I even try?
I look up into the dirt
He looks down into the sky
Whispers into my ear
"Why do we even try?"
Life is it's own frontier
As if we were made to die
At last I see his hand of bones
Creep across my eyes
Comments: 4
Andelice [2012-07-29 15:15:12 +0000 UTC]
I like it :3
Though I was trying to figure out how this would work:
"I look up into the dirt
He looks down into the sky"
Maybe I'm not awake enough yet xD
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LevROLL In reply to Andelice [2012-07-29 16:38:13 +0000 UTC]
I wrote the whole thing in only a couple of minutes. I'm not honestly sure. I can say that part was probably meant to be confusing, though.
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Andelice In reply to LevROLL [2012-07-29 17:04:34 +0000 UTC]
Pretty great for only a couple minutes
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