HOME | DD
Lezzette — the time machine ch1 pg3
Published: 2012-12-14 18:10:15 +0000 UTC; Views: 10757; Favourites: 116; Downloads: 0
Redirect to original
Description
facebook: [link]tumblr:[link]
click the button for change languaje ;_; / clic en el boton para cambiar a español XDway to read: left to right (like an american comic)
edit:
thank you to *APrettyLittleTragedy
for fix my awful grammar ;-; thanks
sdasdsa joder se ve muy chiqutooo D:<
*sighs*
i think this wayis better for tell the story, but the quality of the drawing is now lower than the last ones
;__; anyways enjoy ;D
cover: [link]
[link]
characters (c) Cartoon Netwoork
Related content
Comments: 39
TRADUCTOR PARA LOS PRIMEROS Q VEN ESTE COMIC C:
al día siguiente ...
J: ¿cuál es el hombre equivocado?
F: No, yo estaba pensando en la máquina PB
J: Bro, ya sabes cómo es PB. Ella va a decir algo así como "no hay chicos, es demasiado peligroso porque se puede cambiar el pasado y bla, bla, bla.
J: vamos finn! podemos tener más divertidas aventuras de máquina estúpida salgamos con Marcy!
F: no, gracias ... voy a ir al Dulce Reino para ver si todo está bien.
J: ok voy a ir con mi novia.
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
chido lo de la traduccion no era lo mismo cuando te lo ponian abajo luego ni entendias
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
Y tampoco de las paginas siguentes, (mi tablet es una basura x(
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
Alguien me puede mandar los sub titulos de esta pagina, no se puede ver la pagina en mi tablet, quiem me ayuda
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
usted es gramática está bien, es sólo un par de errores no se preocupen
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
Yeah... just a tip. Google Translate isn't really perfect. I'm not insulting you or anything, just telling you that Google isn't always flawless.
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
im not using google translate... its my awful grammar hahahahaha 
sorry... my inglish is lame... i prefer to make mistakes and be corrected than use google XD
for learn the languaje i have to make mistakes D:
btw sorry the bad grammar ; w;
if i have mistakes please dont be afraid and let me know ;u;
i will really apreciate it
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
en la esquina abajo hay una especie de boton azul XD
dale click y se cambiara a español nwn!
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
en la esquina el azul de abajo ^o^
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
btw american way is left to right, not right to left
and the text is too small, I hope you can change that
hope to see the next page!
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
hahah thank you for the suggestions >u<
im fixing it rigth now!
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
it´s because is flash.... i will do it bigger the next time >u<
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
Puedo marcar el texto del comic!
QUE TIPO DE BRUJERIA ES ESTA?!
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
i hope wend-fri from next week XD
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
jaja vaya menos mal que alguien hace creaciones en español! 
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
This style that the comic is drawn in is really adorable <3
But I do see some mistakes in the dialogue. I could point them out to you if you'd like.
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
hahah thank you TuT
yes please it would help me a lot
my inglish is very bad D:<
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Whats wrong man, are you sick or something?
Nah, I was just thinking about PB's machine.
Bro, you know how PB is. She will say something like "No guys, its too dangerous because you can change the past and blah blah blah!"
Everything else is pretty alright. The only thing would probably be that it sounds too proper for what Finn and Jake would say. But that's fine coming from someone who doesn't quite know the language. <:
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
thanks >u< im need to fix some problems yet :´D
👍: 0 ⏩: 0