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li4m33 — Lazy day //Line art WIP (+Video)
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Published: 2018-03-18 19:36:20 +0000 UTC; Views: 320; Favourites: 16; Downloads: 0
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Timelapse Video: youtu.be/NyeE_adAW1IEdit: This is just a Wip
Timetaken: 2 hours and 40 min
Used: Wacom intuos art medium & MedibangPaintPro
Oc: Nina
Artwork © Malartz
Character © Malartz
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Comments: 8
It is well done. The line art is clear and flowing. Her hairstyle is cute. The cat theme is good. I can't tell if the thing in her mouth is a potato chip or her tongue. To avoid confusion while doing a drawing like this, what you can do is put really light coloring on some items so that it's easier to tell the difference without an explanation. The left foot looks a little too straight on the top and looks smaller than the right foot. You can practice drawing feet so that you understand the anatomy better. The papers that are taped to the wall could have at least scribbled drawings so that it doesn't look too boring. Cartoons often do this so that it looks like they weren't out of ideas/lazy (I'm not saying that you are out of ideas/lazy btw, just an example). You did go for more of a simple look, and my eyes went directly to the character in the drawing. could be why you drew nothing on the papers behind her. If you want, to add depth to the character, since you went for more of a grey scale drawing, is to add different shades of grey to define hair texture, clothing, items, etc. You don't have to, just trying to offer different things for you to experiment with in case you want to expand your art talents. Overall, it is a well-done drawing!
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Thank you so much! I probably should have made it clear in the description of the drawing that it´s just a work in progress, Since most of the things you said like the potato chip in her mouth thing and the posters on her wall thing will be fixed when I color it. This also goes for the texture thing. Your critique is great but I don´t think I can say it´s fair since I was planing on fixing/doing them later. Well the one thing I wasn´t planning on fixing was the foot so thank you so much for pointing it out I will fix it asap!
Thank you so much for the critique!
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I didn't know it was a wip. In that case, you're doing great!
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Yeah I forgot to say that in the description. ;^^ An aw thank you!
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