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roren001 [2012-11-22 17:47:53 +0000 UTC]

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This is a good photograph that captures the silent vibrancy of youth.
From the lighting and soft shadows, the beautiful model and her untied shoes, the white space in front of the model and the lines on the boards all work wonderfully.

However there are some areas in my opinion that could make this go from good to great.
Turning the model slightly so that her feet are pointing to a 4o'clock position and pulling back just enough to give some breathing room for negative space would really improve upon the composition and open up the picture and create a better sense of eye flow.
Of course the shoes have to remain untied e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Big Grin)"/>

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Carbonyte [2014-08-19 09:16:24 +0000 UTC]

Love to the color 

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otrebor2008 [2012-08-20 02:18:10 +0000 UTC]

Great, she is beautiful.

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