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Published: 2018-12-23 15:01:42 +0000 UTC; Views: 2386; Favourites: 25; Downloads: 0
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I'm so excited for the holidays, aren't you? I can't believe how close we are to Christmas already, and because of that, I've decided to make this little, fun Christmas-themed pic for , one of the best artists I know, featuring his five OCs known as "Heartbroken."Now, Heartbroken focuses on a group of five girls each with a different mental disability, who come together and use music as a means of therapy, thus rising up to become a popular band. From left to right we have:
- Lindsey McField (Candy Cane outfit)
- Ashley Donato (Reindeer)
- Megan Schüster (Santa Claus)
- Sidney Brisbane (Elf)
- Brittney Błaszkiewicz (Nutcracker)
As you can see, in order to prepare for the holidays, the girls decided to dress up in Christmas-themed outfits for their performance at a Christmas concert. (Don't they look cute? ) Also, this is the song I think would be perfect for their Christmas performance (I was also listening to it while making this): youtu.be/q48r66YQQw0
I hope you love this jgss0109. You might notice some errors in this, but I hope it's perfect, nevertheless.
If you ever want to use this, please ask me first. I hope you all like it, and leave a comment below if you do. Constructive criticism is welcomed, inform me of any errors I've made, and no rude comments. Thank you.
Heartbroken is owned by .
Happy Holidays everyone!
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[Commenting with the spirit of Critmas 2018 . 
First off, I'll say that the characters here are uniquely adorable in their own personality expressed in their outfit, lovely! I love how you draw them each in different costumes, poses, expressions, eye colors, even skin tones despite the same style - playful variation withing the same group. That's really awesome, meaning you've got a vision when drawing!
By drawing technique I think you also managed very well with the neat outlines and bold coloring. There are still of course rooms for improvements like you might want to add shadings and more details (e.g. hair strands, cloth folding, etc), but I think for a bold cartoon style you already did very nicely.
One thing that concerns me though is the presentation of this:
. the drawing seemed to be cropped on the top and the bottom
. there's unnecessary plastic texture on the paper
. the whole drawing looks lacking the light
If you don't have a scanner I'd suggest to take a photo of this under the sunlight or add additional light source surrounding the drawing. Or create a simple DIY light box, recommended to try:
Presentation of the art is just as important as the art itself so if you're serious in becoming a pro you might want to consider it too.^^
That's all, I hope this helps. Merry Christmas and happy new year!
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Alright, I really appreciate how you like my art and you are right about making room for improvement. (BTW, the plastic texture you see is tape, I felt it was necessary to connect the pieces together if you understand what I mean)
I’m not sure if I have the materials to create a a DIY light box, but I will see what I can do such taking the photo under sunlight like what you said.
I appreciate your advice and thank you very much, have a good day. 👋
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You're very welcome.~
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Oh man this is so adorable! I love the christmas theme you gave each one of them, the design of Lindsey and Ashley's outfit especially.
I think the only flaw I can really spot is that Brittney's head is possibly a bit on the big side. Her larger eyes compared to the other girls also amplifies it. But the rest of it the characters are pretty well done!
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Thank you, it took me a great deal of effort trying to come up with perfect designs for each of the girls.
Yeah, I know. I never was good with size and measuring, I’ll have to practice more in :/ I did do my best at least,
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That depends, what kind of role playing are you thinking about?
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Babysitting or adopting my OC Eduard Nochkoshmar in a different reality.
Dreamiverse Profiles: Eduard Nochkoshmar
Full name: Eduard Tomsk Nochkoshmar
Dream voice actor:
Grant Palmer (regular)
Nicky Jones (teenager form)
Age: 9
Birthday: June 19th, 2011
Mein:
Physical: Preteen-size, pale skin, tilted-up, short, pointy nose, a few gaps in his teeth when he opens his mouth, monochromatic onyx eyes (with grey "eye-shadow" on the left eye), thin physique, bob-cut with dyed reddish pink streaks, a reddish pink Crystal Heart in his body
Clothes: A black/reddish pink-thick-striped (think a inverted version of Snuk the rat's prototype shirt) hoodie with purple sleeves and a red-and black-thin-lined hood used rarely, pink/white shoes, reddish pink/purple legwarmers (reminiscent of the Cheshire Cat), ripped violet jean-shorts and glasses with teal lenses
Nighttime attire: pink/green-striped pajama shirt with short purple sleeves
Swim gear: Reddish pink trunks
Personality: Fearful, fragile, obedient, cute, pure-of-heart, pretty aware of the bad guys, loyal, feminine,
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Oh, yeah I don’t do that kind of role-playing. Sorry, I hope that’s fine.
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That's okay. Also, hello! I'm Nickolas (autistic 20-year old big-hearted dreamer who's doing fine)! How's today and yourself? What can I call you? Care to see my profile and my time-travel ideas if you'd like?
www.deviantart.com/club-dreami…
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I never felt better, I’m excited for Christmas. You can just call me LibraryWizard. (For now, I’m keeping my real identity discrete for safety purposes 🤐)
I already have, I must say very interesting.
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Thanks, LW. Why do you like them?
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Because you have potential with your time travel ideas.
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Thanks. What time-travel idea I have do you love the most?
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I have to go with your written cartoon debuts.
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I like how it explores that cartoons and video games are similar in aspects, I even like how it’s mostly set in the 90’s.
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So 1997 seems like a likely date for The Imagination of Nick, Eduard and Buddy and 1988 a likely date for its pilot? To do so, I might give credit to my inspiration?
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Sure, that would be fun. The point of art is that you put your own ideas into the effort after all.
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Well, like my idea of Rob Renzetti serving as the designer of my written cartoon and why?
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Yeah, and because it’s YOUR ideas, you don’t always have to ask others for help, do what you think is great.
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Thanks for the advice.
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Thank you, I appreciate it.
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HO HO HO!!! Have a MERRY CHRISTMAS and a very Happy New Year!!!
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Thanks, you too. I’m so excited for the Holidays! 🎄
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Thank you, same goes for you.
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Enjoy Christmas Eve tomorrow
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You’re welcome. I really love your OCs, and Merry Christmas. 🎄🎁
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So glad you like them ^^ Merry Christmas too!!!
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