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I wanted to end the chapter with Annie expressing a more positive opinion of her changes.Maybe I should have had her smiling a little in the last panel.
End of chapter 5.
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Comments: 12
Mondoblasto [2013-01-04 08:44:20 +0000 UTC]
That fourth panel made me lol. She looked so cute like that. ^^
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VivaLaGorilla [2012-02-17 03:02:33 +0000 UTC]
Please tell me Annie's partner is gonna end up like a red shirt on an episode of Star Trek. If I had her as a partner, I'd be going to jail for trying to beat her to death with her own two arms.
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lightfootcomics In reply to VivaLaGorilla [2012-02-17 13:26:26 +0000 UTC]
I first thought you were complaining about Thomas.
Isn't Tabitha sort of helping Annie? I thought she needed someone to push her, someone who she would compete against.
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VivaLaGorilla In reply to lightfootcomics [2012-02-18 00:15:55 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, but the way she acts its more like she's chucking Annie off a cliff at times rather than giving her a simple push. But maybe that's just me.
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lightfootcomics In reply to VivaLaGorilla [2012-02-18 11:11:26 +0000 UTC]
In these kinds of situations, you usually start out a character with the most severe version of their personality, and then reduce it over time to make it seem like the characters get along better. Think of any manga or anime, and that is usually what happens.
Tabitha had a bunch of brothers, she's probably not used to dealing with other girls.
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VivaLaGorilla In reply to lightfootcomics [2012-02-19 02:20:37 +0000 UTC]
Ah, so she's a product of one's environment then. Makes sense.
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lightfootcomics In reply to Trigun1462 [2012-02-17 13:26:16 +0000 UTC]
You mean that's what you do in private?
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TheSoylentOrange [2012-02-16 07:42:11 +0000 UTC]
"Connor called won't be back for hours"? Needs a comma or a hyphen or something in there, I think, and maybe a "he" or an "and" in there as well. Just reads really awkwardly as-is.
"Connor called- he won't be back for hours."
"Connor called, and won't be back for hours."
Just, I dunno, something. Between the bolding and the structure it just sounds so alien to say out loud.
Cute chapter finisher, though. Annie's adorable when she's flaunting shyly, oxymoronic as it is.
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lightfootcomics In reply to TheSoylentOrange [2012-02-16 08:16:15 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, you're right, I need to edit that bubble. Things always slip through.
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