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Lightning-Dream — CE- Battle of the Elements
Published: 2011-02-10 14:27:32 +0000 UTC; Views: 458; Favourites: 37; Downloads: 3
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Description
My entry for 's contest.I decided to choose the theme of one of her characters using her power. I saw her character, Yuki Hiyayaka the Cat and I just had to draw her. So, since she can control water and ice and my chara, Charm can control lightning....
Anywho, I really enjoyed making this.
So, please enjoy
Yuki Hiyayaka the Cat (c) =R-U-B-I-I
Charm the Hedgehog/ Artwork (c) *CoolAnaAngel
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I like the effect of her swinging her arm in making it look like that.
And the lightning dissapearing is a cool effect too.
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wow this is amazing
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Thank you very much
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Accuracy
Well well, where to start! xD The accuracy of Yuki's appearance is spot on! The hair is done perfectly, and well done on her outfit~ The wings look fantastic, they look super soft and fluffy! Cx The shoes look very nice, I like how you've shaded the buckles. And the bells look very shiny, very metallic. The way she looks is just fantastic! However her personality is a bit off, she's not the type to get angry as she's very "anti-violence". However for the sake of this scene I think that can be ignored, maybe Charm did something REALLY bad. D: Noez! But you've scored very high with accuracy, well done!
Creativity
The creativity in this piece is over the roof! I love how you've made the weather all stormy; it links in with both Charm's and Yuki's powers and lightning and water! I really like how you've used pathetic falacy [I think that's how it's spelt. And it means you've used the weather to reflect the mood and atomsphere.], it's a very nice touch! And omg, I love the water claws Yuki's using. <33 I've never thought of that before, I totally love it! It's great that you haven't just drawn them there standing, you've engaged them in battle, and it makes it interesting to look at! :3 Good job!
Skill
Well it's obvious your skill is shading. The lighting in this is absoutely amazing! Plus, the water Yuki is using looks so beautiful. The ripples in the water look so realistic! The rain falling looks very good, although the water splashing on Charm and Yuki looks quite strange, maybe make the opacity similar to the rain the in background? Not sure, but great try anyway! Another thing I like is how the shading varies with the surface. Like how Yuki's eyes look super shiny, but her clothes look like wet material, totally awesome!
Expression
I'm in love with Charm's expression, she looks so focused on destroying Yuki! xD They both seem very engaged in battle, but Charm just looks so determined! Her hands have a lot of expression in them too, they look relaxed yet so tense! She really looks like she's focusing a lot of energy into that lightning in her hands, which looks fabulous by the way. xD I love how Yuki looks very elegant, it's very much what she's like, it really brings out her beauty, even when she's fighting. :'D
Overall Excellence
Well I'm very speechless with this, I've really struggled writing this, I'm completely lost for words. <333 I utterly love the background, it looks really mysterious which helps to think of a little story to go with this beautiful image~ I really love everything about this; how realistic it is, how much emotion it brings out at once, and the fact it's always amazing no matter how long you look at it! Thank you so much for trying so hard, and thanks for joining my contest! I wish you the best of luck! You've really scored high with this! <33 Thanks again!
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I'm very, very happy you like it so much. You're the first person to give me a good, solid critique like that and it helps me a lot. Once again, thanks and you're welcome.
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You're very welcome~ No problem, I'm glad you had fun drawing it, it's certainly wonderful to look at. <3
Oh? Well whenever you feel like receiving some critique just pop me a note and I'll get down to it~ c: I love helping others!
No problem hun!
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Thanks! I'll remember that
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