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lightningtumble — Mysteries of Equestria: Library Robbery: Part 1
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Leave a comment to choose what to do next! If you choose 'somehthing else' specify what! I’ll count the comments before I make the next one and the one with most votes will win! If enough people like this then I’ll keep making them! I really do hope you’ll enjoy these!
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Well I’m going to try something a bit different, I love making mysteries and I’ve always wanted to do a choose your own adventure style comic. So this Is how I’m going to do it for now!
Of course I’m still going to make vectors so I hope you will enjoy those as well. I have a commission or two to complete also which I will do sometime in the near(ish) future.
Vectors used/modified for this:
-Disappointed Twilight: jonnydash.deviantart.com/art/D…
-Library: qtmarx.deviantart.com/art/Libr…
-Helpful Twilight: austiniousi.deviantart.com/art…
- BG-Twilight Sparkle’s door: fav.me/d4anx6p
-She is not satisfied about it: fav.me/d47nu7a
-Reading Twilight: d4svader.deviantart.com/art/Re…
-Twilight Wut: yanoda.deviantart.com/art/Twil…
-All other vectors are made by me
If you see any problems please tell me and I'll hopefully be able to improve!
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Comments: 287
I blame Trixie. Powerful spells and cheap tricks together smell of third person vocabulary.
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I apologize if someone has already pointed out these spelling and grammar/punctuation issues out to you.
Misspellings: says, valuable. "It says the books taken weren't even all that valuable."
This speech balloon should read as follows: "In fact, I was going to read some of the stolen books during my next trip to Canterlot!"
"...who...would care about tricks like that?"
"...think of it, I don't know where to go... What do you think?"
"Go [no "to"] get one of my friends to help out."
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Oh I suppose I'll do it.
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Thanks for pointing these out, I'll try and be more careful in the future!
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Do you want to fix those mistakes? I would if I were you.
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Does she timetravel and turn out to be the one who stole the books in the first place?
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Talking to Celestia seems a bit like overkill for a few books.
Aren't they already at the library? Unless you mean a different one, in which case maybe. See if any others were hit.
I vote for this one, specifically Rainbow Dash. She may not enjoy the detective work, but if it boils down to a chase, who would be more qualified.
Only if the something else is Twilight walking through a shopping district awkwardly yelling "JAY-SON!".
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Or if the something else is examine the library for clues, little miss Cake-Biter-Catcher.
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I...I did not see the intro.
TO THE LIBRARY!! To awkwardly yell "JAY-SON!".
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something else: plan out every step of your next move with gruesome detail.
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Get her friends to help out.
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Agree...I'm pretty sure we know who took them
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Something else!
Make it something silly, too.
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Go the the Library to find evidence
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something easle, ask the gaurds (or town watch which ever is more apropiot) as it is important for case intel, that and i dought her magisty would be informed of little details like this, if we where to go to the library it would be a little blind of Intel for what to look for. and finally the friends... will give random results inspeally a serten pink pony . therefor a PROFESSIONAL opinion is in order (detectives do not know all the facts so officers of the law should help.)
motive already: to "trick" guards in preparation for a theft. (eta)
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Go get your friends to help you! The more fresh eyes you have the better things will go.
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Where's part two? I can't find it...where is it...
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I'm sorry, I'm sorry! It's coming!
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Get Trixie. If it wasn't her, then she might be able to help as regards to a motive, because it's the sort of thing she'd do.
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get one of your friends to help you hmm i'd suggest Rarity or possibly pinkie
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Ok, here's my probability choice :
1. Talk to Celestia, if it's an urgent case, Twilight don't mind talking with her first since it's the Canterlot royal library after all.
2. Go to the library, if that is very personal to Twilight, she can go too if she can really do it.
3. Friends to help out, sure it's nice to have the others to come along, but it's going to delay the case a bit.
But if you want me to choose only 1, hmm, I'll take #3, I'm sure the princesses & her guards, maybe Cadance & Shiny too will work out on the case while the Mane 6 & Spike are on their way by train or hot air balloon.
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Something else.
Turn yourself in Twilight because we all know you did it.
Then go and get some therapy for your book addiction.
Your friends are all really worried about you.
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Cheap Tricks? I know the familiar scent.... TRIXIE!
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Go to the scene of the crime. The bad guys always return to it.
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Go to the library. Step one of any investigation is to find clues.
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