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lightofdeth2 — Let go tonight
Published: 2004-07-21 17:25:50 +0000 UTC; Views: 184; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 7
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Description let go my hand
give back my heart
choose another day to tear me appart
get out of my head
look away from my eyes
you are everything i despise
you hold me fast
keep your grip
as you drink my blood sip by sip
i weaken furthermore
and sink to the floor
i cant seem to take anymore
i close my eyes
say my last goodbye's
and listen to sweet angel lullaby's
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Comments: 8

sexipyro216 [2006-12-26 06:18:53 +0000 UTC]

it's about me...this is from a week after we broke up.....you really think i had all those things? i gave you my everything and you cheated on me when i was gone

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lightofdeth2 In reply to sexipyro216 [2007-04-02 19:15:11 +0000 UTC]

wait wtf amber for the last time i never cheated on u!!!that was shit that was stured up..the whole time u were gone i missed u so wtf ever..u ment the world to me then and it was hard to let go..so please stop with the i cheated on u shit because i didnt...

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TooStupidToCare [2004-07-27 00:40:11 +0000 UTC]

Nice job, but why the "..." when talking to the 'lovey'

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SoooThisIsMe [2004-07-23 00:12:31 +0000 UTC]

still love it- good job, keep it up

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lightofdeth2 In reply to SoooThisIsMe [2004-07-23 00:50:47 +0000 UTC]

ya..i guess glad u like it

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goldberg [2004-07-21 17:35:52 +0000 UTC]

that's really good, snaps! just (sorry, the perfectionist deep inside me is coming out) you spelled 'angel' wrong in the last line sorry if i sound pricky...great poem though

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lightofdeth2 In reply to goldberg [2004-07-21 17:48:06 +0000 UTC]

ok thanks lots ill change it

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sonicspeedlp [2004-07-21 17:31:08 +0000 UTC]

its kool! thnak yozu

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