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LightStudioz — Sleep Away The Jeers
Published: 2013-04-22 01:19:25 +0000 UTC; Views: 1966; Favourites: 26; Downloads: 2
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Piper picture ^^For those of you who know, Piper's a geeky outcast, thus faces criticism and a lack of friends.
...porrykitty:c
Anyway, I guess I sorta like this xD
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I really love this piece, Light! It's definitely one of your best by far!
Sorry if I sound bothersome, but here goes!
I really like the positioning of the paws, and the expression on her face. For some reason, I think the end of the bed looks a tad strange, Honestly the mattress (if there is one) should be a different colour to the wood for the legs and base of the bed itself. As previously mentioned by Rainy, the tabletop looks a bit flat and the glasses are missing an arm (I'm sure that was a mistake, though) I'm not a huge fan of how the necklace falls on Her arms, I think you should study the fluidity of strings/chains.
Last off, The tail looks a little... Flat at the base, and a little stiff.
As I said, this piece is really lovely, Light! I hope this was helpful!
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Alright lets go!(please notice thisis my first critique, so sorry if its bad XD)First of all this is great! I love how you did the blankets, and one of the pillows look like it has a face XD. The only thing I would change is the backgrond.
I think maybe you should do a brighter BG but thats how you want it so yeah.
Also the table looks too flat.
I would make it a little more bigger, but this drawing isn't mine!
Oh, and her classes. There missing a leg (or whatever you call thouse things XD)
Anyway this is great!
Other then thouse things, Its amazing!!
Keep it up Light!
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All right, let's do this! I believe this is my first critique, so please bear with me, hehe ;w;
First of all, I have to say this is great! I love how you drew Piper, I think you captured the pose and the expression very well, and the shading is phenomenal! The only thing I would critique on is that the glasses are missing an arm on the other side, and the table below it looks too flat. Also, Piper's tail is a little bit stiff-looking. But other than that, keep it up! This picture is probably one of your best! ^^
Awesome job, Light.
~Rainy
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Thanks so much Rainy :3
Super helpful ^u^
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I'm glad you think so! uwu
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i get youre point ^^ '
But critique doesnt have to be bad, '
It means she can prove heresels and make here drawings better every time ^^
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This is amazing I love it it's really well drawn I love her glasses naclace and it is amazing how you can make amazing videos animated and lps and webkinz love them all!!! I just love how you you draw and how amazingly nice you are and how awsome you can draw and well your just amazing and your drawings are amazing your ideas for videos are awsome I just love it soo much my fave is uptown and red and this is one of my faverot drawings and you just well I just love it!!!! Ahhhh I love it
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No problume light! No problem at all!
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This is pure AWESOME light! Amazing job as always! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/m/m… " width="15" height="15" alt="
I can really see the improvement on this- it's just outstanding!
It also shows a huge content of originality, and something that protrays in a real life situation! (Being and outcase and having a lack of friends) it really makes your creative side shine! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="
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I love the way you did the glasses! The only thing I would do is to work on the perspective of the left side of the face. And maybe make the table more sketchy and soft to match the rest of the picture? Otherwise, this picture really shows improvement! I'm finished with this review, so for now I'll be filling space.
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Thank-you! Very helpful (:
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This picture really reflects her saddness and the teddy bear kinda reflects the fact that piper wishes to be a small child, things were easier then. It makes you sypethize and some can relate... The eries darkness and the fact that glasses explain a story that could bring some to tear. It brings back memories but the picture makes you feel as if there are others even if you are alone.What can I say a picture is 1000 words and this picture in paticular speaks loud. Light wow, you really have an art, a very great passion and talent.
~Mew
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piper i'm sortof smart too. but im an outcast for a different reason. I have aspburgers. light maybe you and I are like twinseis?
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Aw, poor Piper. I will be your friend! You are an amazing kitty!!!!
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Thanks so much!
Omg.
You avatar bro.
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This is sooooo good. Poor Piper :c to me, she is awesome
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Thank-you!
ikr? :c Sadness...
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I LOVE THIS really well drawn light this is amazing
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This is amazing and sooo sad ;n;
Piper is my favourite charrie of yours c:
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Ikr? ;w;
Really? o: Thanks :3
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This picture really reflects her saddness and the teddy bear kinda reflects the fact that piper wishes to be a small child, things were easier then. The errie darkness and her face expressions really can bring you to be depressed and really makes you sypithize the charector... Some people might relate...
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Soo
prettteeeeh *u*
commenting on all your art because it is so cuuuute~ HHHHH <33
I love the pink glasses,the paws and the anatomy. C:
Great work
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