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yeah, my English SUCKS! -.-°
hm... I don't like this page very much... Panels are to small, Background looks awful, lettering is horrible!!!
Hope next page will be better! -.-
bwt, the stranger hold Neo on her bag! I know this looks very strange... Sorry!
Next page: coming soon
previous page: [link]
Invader zim (c) Jhonen Vasquez
Comic Neo and so on(c) me
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Comments: 83
Lileyx In reply to Qaz12po [2010-12-05 17:27:20 +0000 UTC]
thank you so much! ^^ glade you like it!
oh, and thanks for the watch
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Zimandjess In reply to Lileyx [2011-01-02 03:19:47 +0000 UTC]
Cool picture I can't wait for the next!
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Lileyx In reply to Guusagi [2010-12-01 16:56:57 +0000 UTC]
thanks! ^^
Sure I will, page 4,5 and 6 are in process!
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IncipitAmphigory [2010-09-23 18:37:24 +0000 UTC]
That's so cool! I love how Zim can read her thoughts! Wow. This story is going to be really good. Can't wait to see more!
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Lileyx In reply to IncipitAmphigory [2010-09-23 18:39:04 +0000 UTC]
woow!
I'm really flattered!
Thank you sooooooooooooooo much!
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CGIgal [2010-09-18 01:54:34 +0000 UTC]
She is so CUTE!!!
The panels don't seem to small to me.
They fit well together.
"Uhm...what?"
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Lileyx In reply to CGIgal [2010-09-18 08:40:44 +0000 UTC]
THANK YOU!
I think it's really difficult, to get every panel on one Side XD
But I'll have the hang of it! ^-^
yeah... Zimmy... He don't have a clue! XD
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Minimewtwo In reply to ??? [2010-09-16 08:47:14 +0000 UTC]
There doesn't seem to be anything wrong with your english, just one thing for future refrence Zim is and "Irken", "Irk" is his home planet. Other than that Awesome, I shall look forward to the next page.
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Lileyx In reply to Minimewtwo [2010-09-16 10:43:41 +0000 UTC]
ah, thanks! ^^
I fixed that!
I'm really glade you like it! ^-^
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Minimewtwo In reply to Lileyx [2010-09-17 07:38:49 +0000 UTC]
Your welcome, and you didn't have to change it, it as just a little tid bit of info for you to store away for later use. ^^
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Minimewtwo In reply to Minimewtwo [2010-09-16 08:49:18 +0000 UTC]
I mean an "Irken" not and "Irken"
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yakumos In reply to ??? [2010-09-15 19:36:03 +0000 UTC]
I love whatever her name is design. x3 She looks awesome.
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Lileyx In reply to yakumos [2010-09-16 10:42:26 +0000 UTC]
her name is Neo! ^-^
And thank you so much! :3
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traycon3 [2010-09-15 14:31:26 +0000 UTC]
ZOMG SO CUTE! Poor Neo. XD
I think your English is just fine, but if you ever want to run any lines by me, feel free to send me a note. ^^ I'm good with English. :3
I love Ms. Bitters' line, by the way. That was hilarious!
-t3
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Lileyx In reply to traycon3 [2010-09-16 10:42:07 +0000 UTC]
thank you!
If I'll have any problems, I'll ask you if you don't mind! thanks!
yeah, I don't know where those idea come from but I like it! XD
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Yuki-Chan2009 In reply to ??? [2010-09-15 14:16:14 +0000 UTC]
:'D ich finds geil haha ^^ super auftritt XD
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Lileyx In reply to Yuki-Chan2009 [2010-09-16 10:37:15 +0000 UTC]
sag ich auch! XD
Ich fand die idee einfach cool! XP
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FierceTheBandit [2010-09-15 11:02:43 +0000 UTC]
your english semes fine to me i understood the comic completly, keep it up!
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Lileyx In reply to FierceTheBandit [2010-09-15 11:05:23 +0000 UTC]
YEAH! ^0^
thanks so much!
I wasn't very sure about my grammar and all... If anything is incorrect or not understandable, pleas tell me! ^^
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FierceTheBandit In reply to Lileyx [2010-09-15 11:13:08 +0000 UTC]
your welcome ^__^
i'll let you know iof theres any errors
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